Please write more

I was looking through more of your Camp Rock stories, and when I saw the title of this one, I immediately clicked on it. This is probably one of my favorite songs of her's, because I felt like she was singing it with feeling.
Anyways, I kind of wish you would make this a story, and I kind of wish you keep it the way it it, because I'm imagining what would happen next..
Really good story :D in short.

Awesome! :D

I liked this music video! I think it would've been better than the original.

Wow, this was amazing, it made me cry. :) You are a fantastic writer, you always amaze me.

...Oh my god... that was so deep... can you make a sequel? Maybe? Please? If they just get back together, I would be complete... lolz. :o)

Shane and Mitchie-how sad their relationship didn't last. I just hope they stay friends. I loved this one-shot, great job!

OMFG! I need closure! Is it a happy ending? Sad ending? GAH! You're killing me. :/

On a brighter note, I loved the music video. I seriously think you should go and tape it. Then, add the song and put it on YouTube. It would be perfect, a hit, better than the actual video.

Since you told me to come up with my own ending, here's what I came up with:

I couldn't believe Mitchie was actually calling me. Had Nate set me up for this? Was it his way of trying to get us back together? Whatever his reason, and I would figure it out later, I opened my phone.

"Hello?" I asked, almost inaudible. She hadn't called since we broke up. I hadn't heard her voice since that dreadful today, aside from today, of course.

"Hey Shane." Mitchie's voice said, sounding low, sad. What had I done to her? She used to be the happiest person I ever knew. Now, she sounds so broken up, torn to pieces. I wanted to hug her, and assure her that her world wasn't falling apart around her.

"Hey Mitchie." I said, then came the dreaded silence. I decided to pick up the slack of the conversation, "I like your new song."

"Thanks." Mitchie said, and I could nearly hear her smile. I felt like I was already fixing things with her. I wanted to be in her life again, even if it was just her friend. I ddin't realize how much I missed her until I ehard her voice.

"Just so you know." I said, putting myself out on a limb, "I didn't forget about us."

Mitchie didn't say a word. Was the song not about us? Was I terribly mistaken? Did I sound like a conceited fool? Was I wrong? I wanted her to speak, to say anything. I was desperate. As the silence stretched on, I knew it wasn't about us. I wanted to hang up, throw the phone against the wall, scream. I was overwhelmed with the amount of questions and doubts floating through my head / the emotions.

"I was hoping you didn't." Mitchie finally said. I smiled. All of my thoughts came to a screeching halt. It was about us! I felt so relieved, until I heard sobs from the other end of the line.

"Oh, don't cry." I said in a soothing voice. I wanted to wrap my arms around her, and let her cry on my shoulder, and kiss her head. I felt responsible for her tears now, before, in the video, and everytime in between. Actually, I knew I was the reason for all of her tears since the holidays.

"I just-" Mitchie started, before getting cut off my a hiccup, "I don't know anymore."

"Don't know about what?" I cautiously asked. This could be my demise.

"This, us, the song, our past, the future, now." Mitchie said, not sobbing or hiccupping, but I knew she was still crying. I could hear the sadness dripping in her voice.

"I'm sorry." I apologized for everything that happened, anything that I might have done to hurt her, the tears she cried, the heartbreak she felt.

"About what?" Mitchie asked, sounding more confused than sad now. I wasn't sure if I could tell her my thoughts now; I couldn't before. What had changed since then?

"This, us, the song, our past, the future, now." I said, repeating what she had told me before. I felt quite clever.

"Don't be. I had a part in everything, too." Mitchie said, sounding like she wasn't crying anymore. I felt a smile creep onto my face.

"I suggested the breakup. I was too stubborn to say anything when I was broken. I-" I said, stopping myself, only because I couldn't think of anymore things that I was willing to say to her, "All my fault."

"I went along with the breakup. I was too stubborn, too. Half my fault." Mitchie said, making me laugh. I shook my head at her craziness. Why wouldn't she just let me take all of the blame? Why was she so determined to be a part of it?

"Fine. Half my fault, half yours." I said, still smiling. I picked at one loose thread on my sheet.

"Exactly." Mitchie said, sounding - dare I say it - happy. She took in a shaky breath, "Where do we stand now?"

This threw me for a curveball. I had no idea where we stood. I wasn't sure if I was ready to be with her again, but I didn't want to be like ti was before. I enjoyed talking to her, but I knew getting into a relationship would blow up in our faces. I didn't know how to answer this honestly, without breaking someone's heart.

"Uhm...I think this leaves us at friends." I said, knowing this is what I needed to begin with. Then, I added, "Just for now."

"Alright. I can live with that." Mitchie said, almost laughing. I let out a breath, I didn't exactly realize I was holding.

"Me too." I said, smiling. I was so happy that me and her fixed things. Her name would no longer be nothing to me, another heartbreak, or anything. She had a purpose in my life. She was my friend, again; and for now, I could live with that.

FIN.

Haha. I kind of put a lot of effort into that. I don't know why. I guess I have no life. Hah. I hope you enjoyed my ending for it. :)

Mikaela

I'm not sure, but since i LOVE happy endings, she hopes that he saw it (Nate and Jase forced him to) and they have a long emotional talk, and they get back together. Cute! haha.

Sam

ok, i havent do this like in 3 years and ive read a lot good fics, but cmon youu haveto do other chapter please)

and i liked you video's idea)

porfavor que no se acabe, haz otro capitulo)

btw iam from mexico)

awesome story! next, i think that shane is gonna pick up the phone and ask mitchie if the song is about them! i hope you decide to continue with it. good job on your first try!

Awesome oneshot!

I love the music video idea. :]

And, actually, the music video to Don't Forget do exists. :P

And oh yeah, CAN YOU DO A SEQUAL?

:3

god job for ur first CR fic!i love it. tho i am saddened with the ending cuz i dont like fantasizing, I WANNA KNOW wat wudve happened, not fantasize it lol. realy realy god! and poor shane :[