I am so confused? He's getting punished by who? Why did HE tell them that person from past knows time leap secret. How stupid smh. Lemon was not good... Very vague and unrealistic. Sex on a painting? Must be his fetish I guess.

ugh, that idiot. chiaki, not makoto. well, makoto, too, but not in this instance. hope she uses her last leap well.

((omghohmghomghom.)) I love this even more than the first time. I am totally going to watch this movie tonight and then I'm going to be thinking about your lovely evanescent stories and just ... feeling the starry eyes already.

I liked how you made them reunite among paint :D it was pretty

she should see chiaki!

I love the note of hopeful promise this ends on.

so she burned his beloved painting Oo thats hard but she did it for love gosh I love your story so please continue QQ *big sprakling chibi eyes and an pout lips in hope to motivate you*

I think that I can speak on behalf of everyone that has read this... PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! :) PLEASE.

I loved it!

loved it!

Oh...god...what can you say about this? It's perfect and brilliant and amazing and just YES! FTW! Oh my gosh I was completely swept away by this fic. The characterization was just spot on and it was the perfect ending for me. The anime was a cliffhanger too but this fic wrapped it up for me. You made me believe that this is what really happens and now I refuse to believe otherwise. Fantastic! FIVE STARS!

ahh.. I love how you write this pairing. Love it love it.

This was absolutely, stunningly beautiful.

I have only seen this movie once (the anime, though I hear they're making or have made a live action) but I'm currently sitting at the most atrocious wedding (I'm in a barn in cowboy boots if that tells you anything) and I read this on my phone. It was way better than the wedding. I sincerely hope you write original work because this was fantastic. You could definitely get published. Great job!

Grr, Chiaki's constant knack for being in trouble is just...*inopprotune* to put it nicely. I like that for his 'anything' he chose her. But from the beginning of the fic, it sounds like he visits her periodically and I like the thought of that.

PLEASE write a sequel!

PLEASE! I would really like to know what happens!

PLEASE!

I loved the story by the way!

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All I can say was that it was awesome. Like, awesome. The beautiful post-moment contained in the painting (you can see how his fingers were clenching... you have such beautiful detail and dialogue). Chiaki and Makoto well written and grown up. Bravo. Keep it up.