Great story.

It'd be lovely if you did a follow up to this ;)

I decided to try reading a Number One fic on a complete whim...and I think you've got me hooked! Hooked and lined and sinkered ;)

Also, you deserve some kind of major award for the phrase "ergonomic sins." Like a virtual cookie bouquet or something. Awesome!

Mm, gotta love a good cave-in. :D This was sexy and of course very well-done. Excellent writing as per usual!

~Red

cool story. Good job.

Two in two days-woo hoo.

This was really well done. Would have like to seen what would have happened had planted that kiss on her neck... ;)

Thanks for sharing.

Jen