It was nice but the entire fic had some questionable language like the use of the r-word repeatedly and use of hurtful stereotypes like in the case of Hufflepuffs. And Scorpius's spiteful thinking is kinda toxic, he doesn't get away with being a dick just because he's a slytherin. I get that this is an old ficthese things didn't have much awareness ten years ago but it still made uncomfortable while reading. Good effort though!

Well, that was a great fanfic, thanks, still watt to know what happens next though ;)

Great story! I really liked the ending, but would also love to read a sequel. Especially a sequel where Scorpious realizes he is a prick and becomes a better man! He seemed to be making those changes towards the end. I think if Rose saw that, she would give him a real chance. Thanks for the great read!

loved the story and characters but there's no ending really! it could definitely use one, please please please?

Umm watter?

OH MY GOD THIS HAS BEEN SO INTERESTING. The story concept is definitely different than what I'm used to. The locket? Pure genius. It was really awesome. I ended up shouting (figuratively) "What happened?! What's the actual ending?!" and then I read your author's note. This has been very intriguing. Although I would have preferred a little less shagging, but your writing style is pleasant to read and I am very content with it. Love your story.

By the way, where are you from? You sound a bit British in my head, but I really couldn't be sure.

Hmmm...
Maybe it befuddles the wearer, the opposite of what the diadem does.

Loved the story! Just wish you would've continued it or done a sequel! Definitely wanted to see the story go on longer!

Omg there's another recent reader here! This makes me so happy, haha, it feels lonely sometimes because there are so many old comments. Anyway, I've been just making rounds re-reading through all your stories again (is that weird? I just love your stories and how you write), and it's been awhile since I've read this one! I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote Scorpius's POV. It fits him so well, and I think it's amazing how you are able to make Rose's and Scorpius's voices different when you do their POVs. You have a talent of bringing these characters to life!

yyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy!
okay, the concept for this was clever and original. you had me reviewing on almost every chapter, and that NEVER happens. your writing style, as you must know, is perfectly flowy, good enough to be the writing style of a professional, published author.
did I mention your absolutely BRILLIANT concept?

aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh... you're a brilliant writer.
and I've wondered about the whole "is there something against a writer writing something too mature for his/her age", too. the rating thing is only a warning, it doesn't do anything beyond that.

eeeee!
wow, this chapter was exceptionally well written.

Please write a sequel or at least a little one-shot of when they finally got together! It feels amticlimatic just leaving it like that. So please...

At the end of the chapter you use "preposition" but I think you meant "proposition". Also I'm loving this specially the Rowena's locket addition. I think that is gonna work somehow similar to the mirror of Erised? I know this is complete but i'm guessing here. Great work, I love your vocabulary and the fluency of your prose although sometimes the transition between and action and dialogue doesn't allow the reader to understand what the characters are doing.

I am so confused. I liked where this was going and then Rose kisses Lysander and I kind off lost where this was going. But; great story anyhow 3