Nice one. I never got why Keitaro put up with the abuse in Love Hina.

Good fucking shit

Been a while since i last encountered this genre...

(fucked up and pressed post, mobile is suffering) but then again, I kinda liked Keitaro's scorched earth in the alt end.

Sadly enough, I'm not sure if I like this ending or the original. Effectively the same outcomes for the girls san Shinobu (rip)

when the battle get to doing it now Naruto had mad his old ware house #44b the mind meeting with the others he kown of both the vaillge s the top lords and ninjas he working with like the sand vaillge when back in the days the 2 took out a evil city slvers city out kill it top men Billy raummer men who kill off the whipool and took all the scolls and meony too , when Naruto seeing them he took out the men out with his swords to it now siting in the thore chir now and took out the others men out goods and men out too slvers he free and made into a spy networking he be working with 3#t b a new spy guop of men woamn and boys too used the steeds and old base sife homes too , Naruto spying mather is more good then his ex god father and he only had coffie and tea and when used the old homes to sheeping no inn or red lights bars , made him more good too ,when the whipool i back up now he is lord of it #5 now and the herd of the ninjas coincs and made it not be with others in the vaillge

For most girls, these fates and punishment are harsh. Most extreme case is Shinobu. Thrown out for what essentially was believing in lies peddled by main perpetrators and ending up as addict on street? Geee, talk about disproportionate retribution.

I feel this is less a 'dark fic' and more of a 'catharsis fic'.

Anyway, liking it so far; the only issue I'd raise is, how the heck could Shinobu be convinced to no longer like her crush so quickly? She was pretty infatuated with him.

amazing story, very well written, interestingg alt ending too. good job

Damn nice story and nice alternate ending anyways keep up the great work!

WOW to all

U-uwaah... Dark...

Wouldn't be interesting if this one and say, the Ranma one were were part of the same story?

i.e.: Cailyn's Ranma's daughter.

Suu can't be deported if her father exiled her from MolMol, a person can only be deported to the country where they are a citizen, or otherwise accepted by that recipient country.

If, for whatever reason, the recipient nation refuses to accept that the deportee is their citizen or otherwise won’t accept their return, then the country that the deportee is presently in (and who are trying to get rid of them) is stuck with them.

This happens from time to time (for various reasons), and it essentially leaves the deportee in limbo. They’re not wanted in the country they are in, but they can’t be sent “home” either. Some deportees may be incarcerated for lengthy periods as a result.

when he was woking in Robert Krause book shop in the city of new yoke and he thout of him as a father fugether who had help ohers both hina like Naruto and his twin sister to others too who Robert help out , when woking the shop in the 3 yare of it he find out Robert had help form the batman and others in dc too,