Interesting take on Renee! Now that 15 years later we FINALLY have the completed midnight sun, it's always interesting to see how close or how differently people interpret things from EPOV. All in all not a bad rendition, thanks for sharing!

Oh, I also wanted to say that of the SEVERAL EPOV fics I've looked into, yours is by far the closest to how Edward talks and sees things in Midnight Sun. Of course, everyone has their own opinions and sometimes I have my own, differing ideas on occasion of how things go or how he would see things, but I freely admit that currently I'm not nearly motivated enough to write something as long as this and have little right to extensively constructively critique.

thanks again for sharing! (although it's been 10 years since this was posted, so who knows if you'll ever read this)

which chapter does jacob kiss bella? i want that in edwards pov :) btw love it!

Hi!
Great story! I loved your take on the rest of Midnight Sun as well. I wanted to share a funny story with you, I saw you had written this but there was also another Edwards Eclipse right under yours, so I clicked on that accidentally and it didn’t seem like your writing (cux lol duh it wasn’t) and the reason I’m saying this is, your writing has a style too it. You pick up the characters very well. I also write fanfiction and when someone gave me that comment it really made me happy, so I hope it does the same for you. Really awesome work!

this was PERFECT

This was the best Edward prov for eclipse I have evere was keep the work

I am in so much awe that words are hard to comprehend so this is all I can say. HOW THE HELL ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING!

Oh my gosh! I can't get over how good you are. The way you bring on the tension... it's just amazing!

This story is soooooo good! I can't get over it.

Thank you so much for sharing this book. It was so hard to find Edward's perspective on the twilight saga, but, you have brought it to me! please post more of his books and I will be on the lookout

- Once again thank you
- A.L

bella really is stupid to think she can make a difference to jacob's pain without giving edward the boot and choosing jacob over edward. while edward would do anything to make bella happy jacob is not willing to do the same.

As soon as Jasper began reciting Welsh poetry and the alphabet backwards, I started doing the same Love from Wales!

I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved these three books. I am about to start the last one but first I just wanted to say great job writing these books!

i want to copy this story so i will always have it.

You are an angel for writing these books. Please, please, please finish Breaking Dawn. And I wouldn't even argue if you write the Edward chapters of New Moon and skipped the Jacob chapters. I'm begging here. LOL!

I really enjoyed this story :-) I think you do a great job with Edward's POV.