It was a pretty good story :) in just a little confused on why on earth harley was still allowed to participate in the contest when he tried to kill two contestants... and why Drew didn't just call the police instead of calling Diamond.

POV means 'Point Of View'

This was an excellent story! I loved every bit of it! Damn Harley ;)

You said that the contest was for bug-types only but Smoochum and Jynx aren't bug types!

Y'know, if Diamond's hobby is beating up Harley, then Ash's must be making Team Rocket blast off. Excellent story! It's- forgive the cliché contest joke- remarkable! Great job!
-Petal

...Wow. You're a hardcore Pokémon fan. It's funny how you use your dreams as inspiration, and I'm amazed that you can remember them that well! Oh, and about Harley: I think he's just a creepy cheater and wouldn't actually attack them! ...But hey, it's your fanfic, not mine! I'd add more, but my brother shares this account and would probably read this review. This story's awesome! Bye!
-Petal

["Drew stop! I don't want Brendan hurting you again! Just let Diamond…" May turned around when she heard screaming. Diamond was beating Brendan with a bike she um…found.

"*Sweat drop* Yeah she's got it," said Drew.

"*Sweat drop* Yep she does." May was slightly enjoying watching Diamond beat Brendan with a bike.] I had a hard time breathing when I read this! Lol!

["What is with you girls and the kissing!?" Drew yelled upset.] This part cracked me up! *laughs hard on the floor*

Can I use your idea of songs in the story, also at the beginning when May is going to kill Max if he doesn't shut up? Plus the delivery thing (mine isn't as similar cuz the package explodes.) Also the dad wanting to kill Drew if they started dating? I really love your story! I just love it!

SOooooo AmaZing...!
LOVED IT..3

One of the best fanfic i've ever read!

*slow claps* bravo!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
TEARS OF HAPPINESS ARE CLOUDING MY VISUON I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOO MUCH!MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MOOOOOOOOORE
Maybe like a kanto journey or sinnoh journey I don't caaaaaaare I want mooooooore
I sound like a brat .
but whatever I really loved this story! some parts were a little bit rushed but the overall story was gorgeous!

I absolutely loved your story! :D I am such a horrible writer, so I don't upload any stories... yet. anyways can you give me some tips on how to write well? thanx! it would really help a lot. :P

This was exactly what I wanted in a may/drew fan fiction awesome!

Cute!