Here is my review of this delicious tale of a humourous phone call and a poor guy just trying to get a date with his crush who just so happens to be a guy as well - nothing wrong with that. I thought it was cute, cool, fun, and all other such complimentary terms.

My only complaint is that it wasn't longer, hehe. :D

Unless of course you have other similar stories. Which would mean I would have to read them as well. Most likely twice because why not.

Aaaaand done. Two thumbs up and all that jazz, hehe.

lol cute XD

The original story? It obviously doesn't follow chapter 5 and starts the same as chapter 1, so fits as the original story well enough ;)

Again, this was very nice to read, I like the form of conversation without narrative parts and the lovely interaction between these two.

Um, are you sure you didn't mix them at one point? Because you have Kanda (in bold) say "Yuu-chan you're so cute." This should probably be the next line, shouldn't it?

Thanks for this update :)

I really loved each chapter, it's so funny xD I like it how you got the whole story with only conversations, and the conversations they're having are simply ingenious. Not to mention Lavi and Kanda's typical behaviour. Great humour~!

nice!XD

haha this is funny! i like 5/5

This chapter was cute... Lenalee will always be the "mother" in this relationship :P

Okay, you've been added to DocX so hopefully it should all work well. I don't know if they alert you to this stuff or not.

Btw, you've disabled the private messenger so this is the only way I can contact you. Or so says.

Okay, so , Ignore the other message. The plus side of having completely messing with me is that I get to read and review your work.

So, I have activated the email on my profile, just find the link on the profile and it hopefully will work. If you can just attach the file, it should work.

Anyway, really cute story. Even without any description the nervousness is really well stated. I'm interested to see what you want me to beta.

lol Yuu's favorite restaurant...it should be Mcdonalds!

OMG This is really awsome :D btw this is V Brad lol

lmao the note passing was great.

Poor Lavi and Lena, choking on paper XD I love how that's also my friends first instinct when we used to pass notes, I enjoyed this chapter : ]

haha this story is funny! xD

aw! It's over , chapter three with the answering machine incident was hilarious! Anyway, it was great! Hope you write more lavixkanda soon -

Yay you finally updated! Gosh, after so long too

Well it's a pretty good chapter, I must say

Yay you! 8DD

hm,

what i think about your story.

i think i loved it!

it was soo awesome and funny at the same time.

i can just picture someone so confused and wondering what just happened :)

i think you should make alot more storys and/or converstaions like these.

and tell me when you've updated and i will read them & tell u what i honestly think okay?

keep writing your really good (:

your friend : jennadee