Nice story!

Aw, I was hoping for a hug. They should have hugged.
Oh well.
So you're not continuing. Maybe RL right? But thank you for sharing this. It's nice to imagine that Dean had a big brother.

yeah, they were SAM and DEAN Winchester not John

Great :) A cute Dean... Would have loved to see that one XD

This is so good! Please say that you gonna continue this.. Please...

OMG! This is a great story and sincerly hope that you continue to write it. Even if you don't it's an amazing story.

actually kinda liking it. spelling mistakes aside, good plot line. are you continuing?

great chapter, you just need to work on spelling and other little things. you should update! looking forward to the rest of the story :)

Okay. So you have a really great story premise.

And then you stop writing? Please finish this!

A few grammer problems, but I love the plot you have going.

Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!

aww man it's just starting to get good!

So, this is like amazingly good. I love the story line, and how John is part of the family. I really hope you continue, I look forward to reading more!

Like it so far.

But if talking about who I think your talking about, than it's Major LorNE, not Major LorEN.

Interesting, but you need to make each hunk bigger before you split it. Having a bunch of little chunks seems to make time go faster, which is fine for a bit, but you have the pacing of "zooooom!" for your story and the piece would be a bit stronger if you just slowed it down a bit.

Other than that great job. I live the ideas and I love how you tied both shows together. Good job.

Great story. I can't wait for the next update. I hope you update as soon as you can. Later.

gw