I loved it thank you

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that was amazing!
I cried with the death of carlisle.
Love your fanfic with passion!
thank you so much for writting it.

What a lovely wedding!

I cried so hard! Oh gracious!

Oh my gosh! I am devastated! Poor Carlisle! What a chapter!

Cute.

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I reallly liked this story. I liked the way you still interwove the fantasy with what could have been reality. It was a fun littl tale- though killing Carlisle broke my heart. It made me tear up to see Rosalie getting the baby she so often wanted in canon. :)

Thank you for making me cry. Lol. I'm so mad that Felix and Aro and Jane got away with it. I hope somehow justice was served later. That would make me happy.

Oh I don't know if I can handle this one. Nope nope nope.

Well isn't that just a dandy twist. No murder, no death sentence. If he killed her after gaining proof James was alive- he'd have a total mutiny on his hands. I think Felix needs to die, Jane too. Sorry, not sorry.

Oooo what will they do! Glad James is dead, but it seems it doesn't matter if the murder was justified- they kill people anyway. That's not a very good show of leadership to me. Bella was using self defense. But yet her life is still forfeit. I still have a feeling that they've played the wrong hand and are going to find themselves in trouble. You know I wonder, since he killed his own wife- did he kill his sister too? If Marcus knows that Didyme died at Aro's hand (that is if that happened of course) then he'd make a nice ally.

Oooooo James is a dead man. I can already see those costs of Edward's working the same damage on James as he did on the door.

I keep expecting her gift to burst from her. For her emotions to overwhelm her and her body to react on instinct to protect her. I'm glad Emmett with be ok. I just hope they can catch up to James and Victoria before they get to Volterra. I have a feeling though, Aro and Jane's days as rulers are numbered. He's gone too far this time. Well she has anyway.