Man...I had such high hopes for this. I really did. There's not many IchigoxKurumu on here to begin with, but you nerf'd the holy hell outta him. Needing bankai to keep up with gin? Moka being able to pierce his natural defenses and bite him? He constantly emits reiatsu, which is exactly why he couldn't cut kenpachi, so how is she able to bite through it? More so, being able to kick him off his feet while in bankai! Argh! This is frustrating as hell.

Canon regurgitation. Sigh. This story had so much potential. If only the author was actually brave enough to push canon events off the rails.

Okay, Ichigo's incompetence in this chapter was just too FUCKING ridiculous. It doesn't make sense that he didn't even anticipate what Gin was going to do. 'Fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me."

Wouldn't turning Tsukune be a crime?

So... Suddenly Kenpachi? And a Shinigami Club? What's even happening?

The Getsuga couldn't even destroy all of her clothes? Was he holding back 99.9% of it's power?

Not sure How a feel about this, but at least Ichigo's Power-Level hasn't been fillerized. (at least it isn't noticeable yet. if it has.)
Unless he gets severely de-powered like he did in the anime whenever there was a filler arc, he would completely blow the entirety of the Rosario Vampire cast away without much effort. All but the strongest of monsters would only reach Lieutenant level at most. There would only be like 3 monsters that would be at Captain level, and they would be at the bottom of the Captain power level (pre-time skip) at that. Like barely even qualifying. At the level of Renji when he fought Byakuya right after he first got Bankai. Technically it's Captain level but... barely.

I mean, wanting Bankai to defeat Saizou? He could break every last bone in that dude's body with his bare hands. The only way Saizou would have even the slightest chance was if Ichigo was in his human body.

I just hope Ichigo is basically God-like in comparison to the Monsters (since that's how it would actually play out), and that he hasn't been nerfed back to the stone-age just to make him fit into the 'Tsukune' role.

I'm sure you'll address it, but what about orihime!

Nada nuevo, esto es igual que el canon, lo mismo. En resumen, otro fanfic basura con un personaje al azar que sustituye a tsukune.
Estoy fuera

Well dam I love this and hope to read more of your stories

I wouldn't date Moka. Never did like her.

Ugh, Moka is ticking me off with her bite and drink blood thing. He obviously doesn't want it, so quit being a bitch Moka.

This love triangle between Ichigo and the ladies are so well done!

Negating a Getsuga Tenshou, that seems to be unfathomable task for a noob substitute shinigami. And why is Ichigo abusing his bankai form rather than mastering his shikai?

Ch 15 Why is it that the fact that ichigo gave his power to someone else get me mad since he has broken the rule which can lead him to his execution like rukia... Other than that it a great story !