The only problem with this chap is that missions that are given out to a captain that require them to be gone for certain periods of time is always given out by the head capitan by messenger(most of the time scrolls and hell butterflies) if not that important and a face to face meeting important. The other problem is a captain(that isn't the head captain)can't tell another captain what to do. Rank has nothing to do with power over another nor strength. I woul tell yo why but that is a paragraph on it's own lol

Wait when will Cross appear?

Stopped at the middle of this chapter, things started to get so confusing for someone that didn't read or watched d-grey man xP That and the thought of Toushiro being someone else is disturbing somewhat.. Nevertheless, I really did enjoy reading this story, as I said I didn't watch d-grey man so I just loved the characters based on you story, Allen and Lavi being my favorite! Loved their interactions with Hitsugaya so much made me laughing many many times haha! Especially how Lavi kept picking on the two white haired boys xD Loved when Allen was concerned for Toushiro many times throughout the story, he's such a nice person!
Though I'm not continuing this story, i still like to think you didn't really kill Lavi, Krory and Lenalee :( That'd be so sad! Especially it happened in such a weird world, I don't know if their souls could make it to the soul society.
Well I guess that's all what I want to say. Good luck with writing the rest!

I love this story please update again soon

Update soon please

Ok Im confused. Is the 14. Noah in Hitsugaya or is Hitsugaya in real the 14. Noah?

Evil cliffhanger is evil. Now I want to know more! When is the next update? Because thing is getting good, and I want to know what is going to happen next!

OMG He finaly remember! So so super excited for the next chapter! Allen reaction and if the others are okay, can't wait! I like so much hitsugaya character! Please update soon! It's a really good story!

Wait, so allen isn't the fourteenth, but toushirou is?

I found this chapter the one that finally reveals that huge secret I wanted to know! And I also can't wait for the next! Which, will hopefully be when Road tells the group about Hitsugaya or was it Reah? Ah well. I can't wait 'til then, Author-san~!
- Aurel~

Haha~! Oh, Lavi. You really are the demon of this story huh? XD
- Aurel

Yoruichi. Good question! Maybe she is! Oh well. That was a very, interesting chapter, Author-san. I'm still lost on what Hitsugaya's eyes became earlier though. But, that's why we have more chapters right?
- Aurel~

*laughs while clapping*
I seriously have to reward you with those hilarious omake minis you do at the end. Good job, Author-san! XD
- Aurel~

Allen, Toushirou, Musician, *And Kanda: Idiots.
Sorry, another strong urge washed upon me.
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And I really love this... What? Sorry! The urge to say that after the omake was irresistible! Oh well. Nice chapter!
- Aurel