Hah, "adorable little monsters", I love it!

Interesting story so far.
It's too bad it wasn't updated for years.

Hehehehe. Don't think the laxatives would work on Naruto though what with his tenant and all.

An extremely intriguing and wonderfully executed nice twist to NTS, this story is. Too bad the likelihood of it being updated anytime soon is too slim to waste thought on. Oh well... one can only hope you find your long lost muse to write again.

hey man！when are you going to update this story

So very dead.
7/10

Too bad this seems long abandoned, it is quite a good read. I find myself liking this Naruto far more than the canon version actually. Maybe it's just the continual doormat syndrome that he has in canon, but he bugs the shit out of me nowadays. Reading about dark/evil versions is always refreshing.

Realistic, gritty, and very interesting.
I love it :)
Plz update soon.

Well, was nice while it lasted. Thanks for the story.

In an extended fit of Naruto Nostalgia I decided to reread this and I will be moving on to NTS in a min. I must say I forgot how damned good this was.

Can't wait for the day chapter four comes out, but I'll probably be long dead by then...

UPDATE i love it.

Oh man, I really hope that you update this magnificent story. It seemed pretty solid so far with the main lines alongside Canon as well as a little bit of AU to keep things interesting. I can see it hasn't. Been updated in a while, but I'll keep my hopes up that this hasn't. Been abandoned.

Certainly very well done and its an interesting story about a far more gritty Naruto.

NEED MORE! amazing story:)

I know you must be pretty burnt out of the Naruto fandom, but an update would be super special awesome.

Best wishes.