This is a great story, I love it!

Such an amazing story with a great end! Thank you!

A lot of good stories aren't finished or have an average end, but not this one! Interesting solution to Elder-issue and a quite satisfying end! :)

Such a great story with so hilarious chapter! It was written a long time ago but I am reading and enjoying it now. :)

That moment was so touching, if only she knew, "her thoughts strayed to Leo and Chris. Their presence hadn't ruined the evening—quite the opposite, in fact. The setup, strange as it was, had been enjoyable."

Impossible not to mention this awesome part, "Her instincts cried foul. Chris was losing his edge as a liar, or maybe she was getting better at picking out his lies." :D

Very good!

Me encantó tu historia. Gran trabajo!

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Great story! I enjoyed it. :D

I love little Wyatt and Chris. They're both so cute. And Leo owing up to his neglected family without the sacrifice and trauma of having his son die on him was wonderful.

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Loved this story! I know its been awhile since you completed this, but I couldnt resist writing a review expressing how amazing this fanfic is.
One of the things I loved about this was the fact that you portrayed the characted exremely well, as well as your accurate refences to the actual episodes in the series.
I enjoyed this version of how Piper and Leo find out Chris' identity better than the real episode. Also, the fact that you added Dan made the story more exciting...and addicting. I couldnt stop anticipating what would happen next and before I realised, I had simply read several chapters so quickly.
Moreover, I really liked how you centred it around Piper/Leo/Chris and not spent too much time about the sisters. I liked the kind of straight-to-the-point sort of manner.
Needless to say, I throughly enjoyed each and every chapter that you have so eloquently written- or typed. I loved thhe subtle humour and was especially content and satisfied with the ending. (I love happy endings!)
If you wrote more Piper/Leo fanfic or any fanfic about their family, I would wothout doubt, happily read them.
Im sure you have heard it before, but youre an amzing witer and I hope you continue you brilliant work.
Maybe it kinda late, but I hope in the near future you write more stories like this.
xxx

Simply loved it! The story caught my eye right away and I love how chris and Leo bonded more in this story, sure I would have loved to have the reaction of both piper and Leo at being called parents or even knowing when Chris was gonna be conceived but still loved it :)

Loved it, had to persevere because the only time I get to read is late at night. But your writing style is so easy to read and your descriptions and simerlarity to the show were just simply amazing. I enjoyed reading every I loved Chris in this story! Amazing, thank you for the good read.
Hopefully there are more opportunities in the future to review yourawesome work.
until then, Chow4noW

Gasps! And it's out p

Hahaha! Classic charmed fight scene. love it, nice capture. piper didn't use her freezing power to much in this series. I missed it.
Now, to continue,
Chow4noW

Good job on this! I absolutely love the ending to this fanfiction. :)