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SaVrAiNoiR chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 WHY oh WHY - HOW have I missed this? I loved every word! |
dansesinfernale chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 Good lord. You've made me ship this unusual and yet utterly perfect ship. Your descriptions of them are so lovely and yet not out of character- which is utterly remarkable when it comes to writing such a quirky ship. Wow. I have literally never thought of this ship before and yet you have made me ship it so hard. O.O I absolutely loved this fic. |
thablueGRRL chapter 1 . 3/29/2011 i really enjoyed this, so you plan on making more? |
Fatal Mars chapter 1 . 8/19/2010 Wow never thought I would see this pairing, but I must say I enjoyed reading this very much! I really like Isane and to see her get Mayuri who I always thought was hilarious and cute. AH that shower scene was superb! Anywho you have made me a believer with this fic. Kudos now I will search for more on these two. |
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 he's so freakin' creepy - i love it! honestly, mayuri really does need some lovin', 'cuz let's face it, Tite will never give him any... |
Hajiscello chapter 1 . 8/19/2009 That was so CUTE! |
Wheelwright chapter 1 . 8/11/2009 Good evening! Nice one, really! A rather strange couple, but definitely nice. You like picking the creeps, don't you (Yoshida...)? There were especially two things I liked about your story: 1. The relationship of Isane and Mayuri. Her nerves before and while showing her article to Mayuri were very well described. This smacks of personal experience. 2. All that science babble - wonderful! I am very fond of the scene in which Mayuri tries to analyze everything using his most probably enhanced olfactory sense (What isn't enhanced about him? Umm... No, I don't want to go there.) and completely misses the point. Where did you find the story that influenced you? Wheelwright |
C. Jordan chapter 1 . 8/10/2009 He's still got her manuscript. This was perfectly them. I like how you used her bashfulness and still made her strong at the end, and how he played (not toyed) with her hesitancy to show him her work. Very good, and very telling with the whistle at the end. THAT was so cute (if you can link the word 'cute' to him). Hey, and glad you're starting a longer work with Quantum Mechanics. These two are popping up all over now! |
seven of fanfiction chapter 1 . 8/10/2009 I have tried to post the following review many times but to no avail. I have a feeling that there will be a bunch of identical or similar reviews in my name once ffnet starts working! Any way, I hope it goes through this time: Wonderful fic and I loved it! I haven't seen enough of Bleach to know the characters, but it didn't matter. As I have said in reviews of your other work, you are a master of the descriptive kind of writing. You really described the emotions and thoughts of the characters beautifully, and the dynamics of their interaction was very nicely done, creating a vivid scene and atmosphere for the reader. I hope you will write more Bleach fics in a similar vein. |
Renji's Girll chapter 1 . 8/9/2009 You did it and it's great. You've got Isane's misgivings about presenting her work to Mayuri perfect, and he's amused with her for it, but not mean to her. It's clear she thinks highly of his mind, and it's clear he's a little less than scientific in noticing the notes of lavender associated with her. Must have been overwhelming when she gave him the hug. :) I hope you add more to this. I can see there's much more, and you've got a real knack for writing the techinical side and both of them while staying in-character. Bravo! |
x nihilo chapter 1 . 8/9/2009 I love this fic! It's so perfectly executed, with Mayuri being intellectual in his study of Isane's nervousness of him, but how he's still aware of her (like how she smells to him) as a colleague. Loved the bit about him being above having a seizure, too. It showed his sense of humor. It was good to see the man without the madness. And when she hugged him. Holy cow, that's probably the closest anyone has ever willingly gotten to him! The touch with him whistling at the end was brilliant. I'd like to see that in the anime. Superb. Now make another chapter. Please. - Sensei7 |
Doitsu's Storyteller chapter 1 . 8/9/2009 Absolutely magnificent! I apologize for not reviewing sooner, something was wrong with the review page *grumbles*. Anyway I read Match Me and found Mayuri and Isane's date very interesting! In fact, I'm a huge, HUGE fan of Mayuri because he's so...open-minded on certain things and Isane is just like me because of the starnge dreams we have, so I can relate to her *sweat drops*. Pairing up Mayuri with Isane is one of the best things anyone could have ever done, and the way you wrote about their feelings for one another was outstadingly good! There were no mistakes in grammer, but I did see a tinsy bit of mispelled words but we're all human. So far I give your story a 100%! Oh and can you please write up another one-shot or a chapter fic on how their relationship grew and how their zanpakutos regard each other. Update soon and great story! I am going to have a 40 sentence story on Mayuri and Isane, it'll be called Scientific Healing! Bye and Good luck! Message me when you can! |