Commenting now before I read this.
I'm a hardcore yaoi fan and not really interested or like Naruto with any of the female characters, let alone a female harem.
What drew my attention was in fact your artwork I stumbled across while googgling images of some of my fan Naruto yaoi couples. Obviously this ain't yaoi. but your illustrations here and on your DA highly peaked my interest.
I am not saying this in any negative form. I'm just trying to get the hint across that, despite me not a fan of any Het-Ships the artwork here has drawn me in and made me one hell of a curious kitten.
Once I have finished all the current chapters I will once again write a review.
I am curious to see how the depictions of art play out in the story. 3

THE SAGE OF THE SIX PATHS IS A SEXY FEM FOX ?! Woooow! Did not expect that. Is she going to be paired up with naruto?

Who the fuck is mizukage Ameritus? You can t just make random OCs like that and replace the canon characters. Also you replaced several of the seven mist swordsman like Ameyuri rings, jinpachi, fuguki with some of your own characters. That’s just not done !

Great.. now we have an op OC

I love this story hope u continue writing it.

What about the sharingans in his arm? Danzig would have survived that using izanagi.

Seriously a stupid fight where he shouldn't of needed to use the kyuubi or give away so many if any of his secrets. Probably the worst chapter I've read in this story.

In some ways this story is good. However theres several things that just make no damn sense. Also narutos fighting ability is allover the place plummeting often.

This story is passable for a read but that's about it in sorry to say.

Right now I'm trying to figure out why the hell naruto decided to announce to orochimarus henchman and all the foreign shinobi how his chameleon technique works. Bragging like an idiot.

good chapter but you still haven't said if its Naruto whos the assassin but apart from that your writing is commendable considering the fact that I am the great and legendary Anaklusmos 14 writer of Percy Jackson fanfiction compared to me your pretty shit but I'm sure you can fucking improve can't you

Actually sad that this is discontinued, but will put it on my favorites list anyways

Bruh my nigga Deidara is in this so early in the story

The Red Dragon. Sasuke playing Go Fish with a little girl. Naruto uncomfortable being a chick magnet. Wow. That's a lot going on right there.

...wow that was spicy

Naruto is an Assassin

...Tayuya's well endowed? Uh, no, she's practically on par with Sakura, and that's when Sakura is twelve and Tayuya is fifteen. with Tayuya being only slightly bigger. She's practically flat chested. Only R-18 artwork of her gives her anything more than small B cups.

Naruko strikes me more as being the daughter of Naruto and Sakura, given that she's female, blonde and has green eyes. Guess that Naruko MKI is pretty much just 50 percent Naruto and 50 percent Sakura.