Thank you, thank you, thank you! It's wonderful, weaving together every detail in a way that makes so much sense. And you've done so well with Phoebe's motivation at this point in her life that I find myself really getting her, and she's the sister I struggle to understand.

So thanks again, this was so good.

I’m surprised this story has so few reviews. I believe it’s one of your best, and definitely one of my favourites.

Anyway, I think you wrote Phoebe's voice perfectly, without glossing over her flaws or giving reasons for her behaviour. In other words, you made her in a person, and not just a list of character traits and memories. I also loved seeing her perceptions of Prue and Piper, and getting a sense of where they all were in their relationships with one another.

I could go on and on...but suffice to say, you have a real talent, and I am amazed that after 8 seasons and thousands of fan fictions, you’re still able to show me something new about these characters I love so much.

Thanks for your story, and I can’t wait to read what you come up with next.

I liked seeing Phoebe before Charmed, it made me think about how much she changed, and now I want to go watch season 1 again.

I loved it! I like your interpretation of what happened. It was very true to the show. Great job.

Bah! You reminded me why I liked Phoebe so much in earlier seasons!

This was so well written and so well thought out. I love your stuff!

This makes me feel sad for Prue and sorry for Phoebe :(