That was awesome! I even laughed out loud at a few of them! xD As something written in 5 hours, this was very well done and was extremely enjoyable to read! I wish there were more things like this I could find. :)

I loved this so much! I just adore things like this, little one-sentance stories that go with a theme. There's always so interesting. And this was just great. It had humor, it had seriousness, it had sadness, it had little moments that were just oh-so Jade and Anise, and I loved it all.

Love these! Number 3, (Young) HAS to be my absolute favorite, though. I completely agree with it.

Well written! Great read!

Hi ilu. C:

When I get back from my trip, remind me to crit in full the rest of the ones I haven't commented on so far. I have so many more favorites to talk about. :'D

So cute! Definitely believable situations for the two of them as well as all the others! I loved the short but sweet descriptions. Great job :D