This was very nice. It seemed to be in a way poetic and philosophical. It's probably the best personification of XANA I have ever seen.

Your writing style was very nice. Everything was fluent, yet a bit ambiguous. Not too ambiguous but just enough to give it a feeling of mysteriousness to it.

This is the skill I want to have in my writing one day.

...Aelita died, didn't she?

I like this fanfiction.

absolutely GRIPPING! I HUNG ON EVERY WORD AND LETTER! ZOMG that was awesome! cant explain just how awesome it was! this is the first fic i read that gripped me like this and the first fic ive seen writin like this...again awesome

You like angst apparently .

I honestly adore angst, I love sad fics, and at least 50% of anything I write is angst

{Okay, just because I don't post, doesn't mean I don't have about 5 unfinished stories laying around (; }

This was a really nice piece of work though. It's so vague and mysterious, yet you get just enough to know the gist of it-something I need a lot of improving on

Yay! 3 *hehe*

This is so brilliant. Do you know this? You should. Because it is. I love introspective Xana peices so much, and I think yours is one of the best. They way you make Xana so flippant and uncaring, simply walking away from something that would have humans scrambling for a better look to see the outcome underscores the difference between him and humans so perfectly. It's amazing, all of it.

That was interesting...

And it made a whole lot of sense too, I like it :D

Good job!

good job _

An interesting fanfiction. Xana's POV, right? I liked it. Keep on writing, buddy!