I felt a little queasy with the Soul Tsubaki thing but not too much. I loved this fic!. It's a little different and the end made me grin like a fool.

Okay can I just say I LOVE YOU? I've read your fanfics and I absolutely adored them and the fact that you watch or are interested in a lot of my favorite shows and mangas and you ship the RIGHT PEOPLE! THANK YOU FOR THAT! Sorry if I sound creepy but I started to read your fanfics and I just love them like I love this one because I could imagine Soul and Maka exactly like that! Very well done and keep up the good work!

i just love maka's girl power this is a cute story and like the strong friendship between tsubaki and maka :3

JAHSKAHAJHABAJKJ! You make me have the fangirls! Love it!

This is really sweet! I'm glad I stumbled on this little story. You did a great job building up their relationship and exploring how slowly you can fall in love with a person. I'm not sure I could see Tsubaki purposefully hurting Maka by making her cry, but I do like to overall fic. Great job!

Wonderful! :D it was so funny! It reminded me of Toradora in a few spots! Haha, great job though, I really enjoyed reading it. :)

Okay, so, I usually don't review but... The way you ended this so subtly was just... Perfect! I loved it!

Mawwwwwww...my feels be feelin' happy...

This was wonderful; I really enjoyed this piece. And don't worry about the characerization. I think it was fine, nothing too out there, just what's expected out of am AU piece. All in all, nicely done. :)

Awesome you should do a sequel

Awww! So sweet!

A-W-S-O-M-E I LOVED EVERY WORD! D

A-W-S-O-M-E I LOVED EVERY WORD! D

Amazing!

Love your story! Nicely written. Tsubaki got me, I didn't know she had that planned. Soul and maka are made for each other! ]