I have a feeling that was Orochimaru just then.

When I first started this story, I was like, "Oh this is... Interesting... I wondr how it will turn out?" I read it in about a day, and by the 13th chapter, I was nearly in tears. I thought he loved her! What made him so mad? Congrats on the story, I look forward to the sequel.

-Risa out!

P.S.

I'm adding this to my story list. :)

I must say how I love Akio. She is totally awesome and I share some of her likes :D not the blood, I don't really like blood but everything else :D She seems to be a very strong willed character which I enjoy. And you made Karin the bitch she is (excuse my language if it offends you) I loved the detail that you put into her character description and devolopment, misspelled that because I fail, all and all I really enjoyed this chapter. :D

Im going back and Rating all of your Chapters! :D I loved it~

lov dis story

OH MY GOD

i would kill u if u didnt make this story into a sequel

i am still confused why her freinds acted the way they had

Wow...awesome

Lol love it so far. and hon switch the 'e' and 'i' around in 'Deidara'

This story was freakin sad!

Yayz! I tcontinues! :D

I really, REALLY, want you to make a sequel to this story. I thought it was SO good! I wasn't expecting the twist at the end either, but I still want Pein and Kiyuno to be together. I guess you could say I'm a sap for happy endings... PeinxKiyuno all the way! _

:( its over :(

The story is over? Oh come on! You can't end it like this! Seriously! -_- This makes for great drama and great tragedy but still. T_T Atleast put a Akatsuki bashing chapter if you're gonna end it like this. XD

You should totally make a sequel!

It just ended so sad,plus you really thought Kiyuno and Pein were gonna work out...I still really liked it though.

.dysfunctionxx n_n

bahaha hi five to robotokun xD

EEP IT BE OVER! AW xD