nice! the reno problem was a big annoyance, but i absolutely adore your yazoo and vincent.
and i think you portrayed the childish side of kadaj that seeks attention very well.
great story!

and one thing, Yazoo should be more confident because he's truly beautiful and pretty. More beautiful and prettier than that bastard spoiled boy. And he has that allure too. Yaz is kinda stupid sometimes xD

Oh, I still remember how happy I was when I read this chapter for the first time. XD

I feel sorry for them xD

where is kadaj and tifa? Are they back to midgar? Yaz didnt mention them again here, looks like ch 20 and 21 from totally 2 different story :l

urm.. They're still at Vincent's house, right? So why Tifa and kadaj there?
It's nice to hear that kadaj and Reno didnt work xp

Chaos/Yazoo are always interesting

Poor Yaz. XD

a bit bitter at beginning - when Reno told the fact that he never tried to do anything to Yaz even a simple breakfast outside but he had done it with daj. So sad. But the end part made everyone smile. A little happiness for the princess. 3

they both aro so cute.

Yazoo just too kind. If I were him I'd never ever forgive Kadaj

and here again the sad scene. This chapter wins. The sex scenes are very hot. Since I'm a RenZoo shipper I always hungry for RenZoo sex. But this one is totally the winner.
And back to the freaking blue and sad scenes, everytime Yaz mentioned that Kadaj won his place, I cried. And the last paragraph own everything. Make me want to hug Yaz tightly and cry with him.

I hate Kadaj. I always hate him. Okay, I admit I hate him because of some fanfics, especially a fanfic like this... XD
I cant help, but he's so sassy, a little spoiled brat. I really want to hit him for hurting Yaz like that. So many fanfics which Kadaj always get what Yazoo has, even Reno!
I cried when I read this chapter. Yaz always did his best, did everything that people told him to do and never complain but they, people would chose Kadaj, Reno chose Kadaj... TAT
Oh well, this is actually the second time I read this fic but I still cry! XD
Sorry for my random talks xD
Just adore your fanfic so much!

This was major fun to read.
Very OOC, but somehow, surprisingly, I didn't mind. It was so sweet, cute and adorable.

Hi Labe, I have to tell that I really, really love this story. It shows me another side side of the characters involved, and I love that. Keep going like this!

Sincerely, Kihatsu.