Okay so first I want to say that even though this story is old I did enjoy it, but there were a few things that didn’t make sense. Jasper is supposed to be the all famous God of War and yet you made him weaker than a human and constantly getting his ass kicked by every body that he just seemed so pathetic. Bella’s empathic powers should have had her sending the emotion of pain to everybody when Jane hit Edward because she had no control over it like Jasper. Lastly your timelines and events keep changing and are confusing. One passage Jasper and Charles just made up and its only been less than a year and the next sentence you said it took decades. You have Reid in love with Jayme yet he’s supposed to be mated to Crystal.

Okay so I never saw my dad's dingley thing, but I did catch my mom and dad doing the deed. I was about 2 or 3 I heard something in my sleep and they were on our screened in front porch which just on the other wall from my room. I went to see what the noise was and there they were doing the horizontal Tango. HEE HEE HEE. Of course, I didn't know why mommy and daddy were wrestling on the lounge on the porch. They urged me to go back to bed. Of course a few years later I figured out what I saw. So Moral of the story. When people say kids don't know what they are looking at, they may not at the time, but they don't forget and eventually, they figure it out.

Please for the love of god stop calling him jazzy

Low key offended that you insinuated that Iowa was 12 hours away from Ireland ... its a 7 hour flight just btw

didmy they get daisy back in Ireland when Bella was 5? she's 12 going on 13 at this point, right? so is the dog a daisy 2.0?

It is cute story with Bella as a kid...

Hmmm... Why was Jasper with Maria if he was already with the Alice?

That was an amazing story! Loved it!

james

Jasper

I really like the ideas for your story I'm just s little confused because you keep changing things. Like how long Bella's friend can stay and things like how old her dog is.

From someone who took concert band from 6th-12th grade I have to say I appreciate the accuracy of this chapter.

also lassie is Scottish haha. either way loving the story

half way through the chapter and came across the age 21 to drink and then not being sure what the age is. Anyway I'm from England and it's exactly the same, you need to be 18 to drink but if you look old enough sometimes they don't check id's

GOOD STORY