Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 3 piercings Some where around 160 tats ..good story BTW.. thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope one day you finish this. It's really good. Take care, Bunnies |
![]() ![]() More chapters please |
![]() ![]() How could Bella react so incredibly stupid? You don't need to study psychology to know that rape victims question their worth and cleanliness. She gave him the impression to be disgusting instead of expressing her shame to have pushed/"assaulted" him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your storyline in this one. Edward is so brave to tell his stuff to his parents and even Charlie. Looks like life got busy for you and writing takes time and focus. I'll put it on alert, double never know...Thanks! Shannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Read straight through. Couldn't stop. Gonna check out your other stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, does Edward have cancer? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you've been gone for years but I hope you will finish this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I hope you are fine and will come back soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hospitals are dury bound to inform a parent or Police when a minor presents himself at a hospital. Especially with a stab wound, it's the law. So how he managed to avoid his parents or anyone else knowing what happened is pretty unbelievable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Selfish fucking pussy! Don't matter what terrible thing happened to him, to just up and leave his parents, the people that gave him life, and ignore their suffering is unforgivable. Cue virgin, or semi-virgin, Bella, who's saved herself because she never got over him, teaching him the error of his ways. He's a misogynist who is completely disrespectful to women and doesn't deserve her time, let alone her body. Yuk, with his "I've fucked on every surface" skeeziness. Hope his disease ridden ass gets tested before Bella's inevitable capitulation to him. |
![]() ![]() he fucks someone EVERYTIME he goes out? GROSS why would you have him be such a skank? and now that we know he is you want your readers to want bella with him? UM NOOOOOOO im out Edwards to stupid and gross in this |
![]() ![]() Hes such a pussy! I cant relate to people that cant talk about whats wrong with them...its so stupid and Edward tried to talk to them once and they didn't listen so he punishes them for it for a year then runs away? they should all just leave now and forget about him they've wasted enough time on this piece of shit hes nothing, nobody just a piece of shit pussy manwhore |
![]() ![]() Wow Edwards just a huge pussy... cant deal with his problems like a real man...runs away from them and refuses to talk about them this is the piece of shit pussy you want bella with? why? hes 27 yrs old covered in piercings like a fucking kid...how pathetic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just seen this being recd on Fb and decided to give it a shot! |