He destroyed my entire country?

Why? WHY?

Great story. No complaints about your grammar or spelling at aall. I never even thought about Australia being an ironic gift for Penny-you've gone in an original direction describing Billy's post-I horribleness. I liked the little whimsical bits of Billy we could see ("Platypi?"). The way Dr. Horrible was pretty sure Captain Hammer didn't know what ironic meant made me laugh. The best part, though, was the way you threaded Billy/Dr. Horrible's emotional agony throughout the fic-the sense of tragedy never left, and in fact escalated as you revealed the climax of the fic. The last words, "Torch it," were perfect. They hit me like a punch in the gut (but in a good way). Thanks for writing and posting!

P.S. I loved the "Horriplane!"

this is really excellent. i read it a few days ago, and i didn't review at the time, but it stuck with me. i figured that meant i ought to tell you-you did an excellent job.

As much as I loved the dramatic-ness of this, the humor of the word Horriplane made me love this little blurb even more. And the fact it ended in the phrase "Torch it." I'm pretty sure I'm a closet pyromaniac.

"Horriplane"... Ugh, Doctor, how far you've fallen. That's as bad as the HamJet.

Nice work; thanks for writing.

Oh...very nice. I like!