| Reviews for Scorpion's Star |
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PythonAnon chapter 23 . 9/20/2016 AUGH YOU UPDATED YOU JUST MADE MY LIFE EVEN THOUGH I HAVE BEEN PUTTING OFF HOMEWORK IN ORDER TO REREAD THE WHOLE THING TODAY! Ahem. Thank you kindly for updating this lovely story. It made me very happy to see it and I much enjoyed being able to reread this tale and remind myself of all the intricacies. *bows and flops out of the room* |
yellow 14 chapter 23 . 9/20/2016 A pretty decent return. Keep updating |
PythonAnon chapter 22 . 7/14/2014 Hey there! I know you haven't updated this since 2010, but if you ever have the inspiration to bring it back to life, I'm following it. I've really enjoyed this story, and your Scorpius is super original. You are an awesome writer, and good job with unique Tri-Wizard tasks! :) |
Sabine8195 chapter 22 . 8/27/2012 you never finished! And clearly you're still on fan fiction if you put a new story up earlier this year! So this is me complaining! Update! |
PotterVampireFan chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 wow |
Purplehonor chapter 22 . 5/17/2011 This is great! Please finish! Good job! |
Iris chapter 22 . 1/27/2011 Aw, so sweet...Nice little in between chapter. Looking forward to the next update! |
TeamAbodo chapter 22 . 12/27/2010 Bloody adorable. Scorpius just sounds so... cuddly w I'm a terrible replier on , so I apologize for never responding to your reply to my last review. I tried but the words left me. I would love to read about all the things Scorpius means when he says things that seem strange. It would be so interesting to learn more about him. *cough* In regards to this chapter, cuddly is this entire thing. From Scorpius to Albus's adorable reaction. I must say though, that I believe Scorpius's initials are SHM. Not sure when it was released for Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy's middle name, but all the sites I go to say that. I could be wrong on the spelling. (going from memory) Again, adorable, cuddly, and made my Christmas even more enjoyable D |
yellow 14 chapter 22 . 12/26/2010 Very sweet actually. I love the idea of a MALFOY wearing a Weasley jumper;D Keep updating and Merry Christmas. (Even though it is a little late.) |
TeamAbodo chapter 21 . 11/30/2010 I'm so flattered that you liked my review! I was going to respond that day, but I was so giddy I put it off and then NaNoWriMo kinda slapped me silly. BUT I SHALL REVIEW NOW. I loved how Albus and Scorpius had their arguement. I loved how angry and sad Albus was and how... I'm going to take a stab in the unknown and say Scorpius was scared. Terrified that he'd lose his only friend and then he'd be alone. When Scorpius smiled at the end, I think my heart exploded into rainbow little pieces. And I may or may not have teared up at one or four parts. Auto-immune disease for magic? I love it. Read one before like that with Scorpius being sick and Albus knowing but falling for him anyway. But I love yours more. Your Scorpius is so sweet, wise, mature etc etc. And your Albus just feels so real. I mean, the readers have picked up on all kinds of small little hints about Socrpius's illness, but in real life, I don't think we would have. The way he handled finding out was perfect too. We all would like to thinkt that we would handle bad news with grace and comfort, but a shock puts us into shock. It was also a relief that you didn't stretch it out over multiple chapters. You got it all done in this one, with all the different stages of his accepting the truth. Denial, Anger, Bargaining, Depression, Acceptance... I think you may have skipped Bargaining for the stages of grief, but you did anger so bloody well that I think it makes up for it. The fallout with Mirabelle kinda surprised me. I went back and reread the chapters before this one and it made sense after reading them, but I'm stilling having trouble remembering the actual event. That's really the only thing I can point to that took away from just how much my heart tightened and felt your character's emotions. Again, I'm so flattered you liked my review enough to mention it in an Author's Note. It made my month 3 p.s. Is Scorpius going to survive? Is the palm reading correct or is the prophecy? Or are they both? Shall there be yaoi? Okay that last one isn't too important, but the other ones have been digging little holes in my brain seeking answers. But they don't have any. Because it feels like it could go either way for any of my questions. Which is driving me absolutely MAD. |
yellow 14 chapter 21 . 11/18/2010 Your welcome. Auto-immune disease? An interesting idea. Wonder what kind of side effects a magical auto-immune disease might have? I hope they fix things between them, I think Albus would not forgive himself if Scorpius died while they were fighting. Keep updating |
kingandsorcerer chapter 21 . 11/14/2010 D: D: D: D: With all my homework I hadn't had time of catching up with all the fanfics until NOW! November D: I can't believe 2010 is near its end .-. Regardless :P WOW. Your fic is as good as I remembered, and I almost cried with Albus in this chapter ): First, I thought of killing him for his reaction, but then I understood xD It makes sense. I think that by now I should know that nothing will happen between this two, and that doesn't bothers me D: I like their relationship very much :P How many more chapters do you will write? :O I hope this review can count for all the 21 chapters :P :D M.B. Black |
MyDreamsToYou chapter 21 . 11/14/2010 Nice chapter! Well written as always but I must pin-point that Scorpius' mother's name is Astoria/Asteria, not Eleina. |
Ko-chan to Ya-chan chapter 21 . 11/14/2010 Nice. And don't worry, it still makes sense enough. The vagueness just works all the better since it's Scorpius. XD Lol glad to know I'm not the only one staying up all night, sewing cloaks for the premiere. XD |
8ami chapter 20 . 11/7/2010 This is a very interesting story that is very captivating, something a lot of storys lack. This chapter's cliffhanger has only increased my worry over Scorpius' well being. I hope it's curable but from previous chapters I'm not so sure. I'm not use to worrying about fictional characters but it's well deserved with you're story's plot. I love the sections on music as well, I'm not music incline in the slightly but I'm glad Albus and Scorpius are. I really hope you keep track of this story and remember to update cause it's a great story. |