o.o And you said I was incredible? You're not too bad yourself, are you? I love the idea of this, mainly because you hardly ever read about Matt in the Mafia, as most people prefer to put him in after Mello blows everything up.

'leaving the redhead in peace (or pieces, as it had probably ending up being; Matt really depended on him)'

That was my favourite line, well...phrase. I read this a couple of times, actually, just to absorb its brilliance.

I favourited your story by accident, XD, because that's where the review button thing used to be. But it's a worthy story, so it's staying .

:D

I shall read more,

karierte

Oh my gosh, this was so good! I honestly didn't expect it to be Matt but then I was like 'Yes!' (because seriously, I love him).

Great, great, great job on this! I hope you'll write another one soon!

The caliber of MelloMat [romantic or otherwise] fanfic on this site is severely lacking. You might disagree, but I thought it was very good, and enjoyed reading it. Probably more than... all the fanfic I've read after searching through six pages of crud. If you were to write a follow-up, or another them-oriented fic, I'd totally read it.

Cowabunga? -Judo

Hmm. Interesting take. I actually went back after finding out that she was he, and the 'modesty' makes a lot more sense with that in mind.

I think it's definitely worth taking another stab at a DN fic. Mello seems pretty IC, though it's hard to tell with Matt, since he was... um... 'undercover' for most of it.

But yes, worth another go if you are so inclined. Good job!

(I like the obscure game reference, too. Very Matt-ish. ;) )