| Reviews for Losing It |
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101AnimeProductions chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 Loved it! And love NeverShoutNever 2! |
PassionateDolls chapter 5 . 5/14/2010 Wow. I absolutely adore this. And the fact that you used Losing it by nevershoutnever as your plot line is ADDICTIVE. You've gotta teach me how to write this good. few mistakes here and there but still awesome. KEEP IT UP. ,-PDA. |
doctorsnake chapter 5 . 8/19/2009 The lemon was good. :-bd Hahaha. great chap! Though I find it kinda fast that they're gonna marry already. HAHA. Oh well. :) Good chap still. ;) Update soon :D |
K and Jazz chapter 5 . 8/17/2009 It was great. : D Se, you don't need me for my lemon skills. I don't even have skills. XD But trust me, it gets easier as you write them. I'm like a total pervert so they're easy for me. If you only knew… I think, no, I know I'm worse than Jiraya. : D XD You should continue… , do one more chapter. Do a big ass time skip to their wedding. : D I'm happy you updated. It prevented me from doing my homework. XD And… since I love you so much, I'll read your T rated story. I DO NOT read T rated. I can't stand those kind of stories. What fun is just kissing? Eh… that's bullshit. I only read M rated so… you should be happy if I decide to read your story. XD I hope you decide to continue! : ) !(-KinkyK |
TragedyDawl chapter 5 . 8/17/2009 great last chapter. Lemon was pretty good for your first one, cool they got married :) |
doctorsnake chapter 4 . 8/15/2009 NO! Hahaha! It's a great story. : Uhh, YES FOR LEMON. :D Hahaha! I apologize for my pervertedness. :) Update soon. :) |
K and Jazz chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 Great chapter. Too tired for reactions. : ) Avoidance sucks. How could you avoid somebody as hot as Sasuke? That's like avoiding… I dunno somebody really hot. Too tired to think about that. XD Sakura… is just being Sakura. I guess I can't change that. : ) I don't think you should end it. You should make a lemon. I can help you on it. Or revise whatever you write. Or I can write it for you. : D Also you should add to it. Maybe make Sakura try out for a singing competition and have her win. And then she gets famous, and then she has to leave Sasuke. And then she comes back and she gets awesome. : } Does the ABSOLUTELY amazing story comment go to me? XD Sorry your caught up. Most people are now a days. Just till wait till you get in school. : P I'm dying to post billions of stories. I have a whole idea book of stories. Which contains over thirty different ideas. I majorly need to type. : Saturday, all I have is piano and… running. I'm trying to train myself for the mile I have on Monday. -_- Post the story! : D It sounds interesting. Update when you have a chance! !(-KinkyK) |
Kanryu chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 I hope you don't have insomnia 'cause that really sucks ): For the love triangle sort of story, I think you should do it (: Readers tend to love [love triangle] sort of stories. An example is mine that's KakaSasuSaku. It turns out SasuSaku in the end D Sasuke kissed Sakura! Since she's been avoiding him, I hope HE doesn't have insomnia from like thinking why she's avoiding him xD Personally, I think you should just keep it at the kissing stage for now, I mean, they just got together, right? As much as I'd love to see a lemon (yes i'm a pervert), some things just can't be rushed! And I understand about how hard it is to write lemons. I'm currently working on one right now on my story, and it's causing me a lot of grief -.- it's pretty embarrassing to be writing down these things lol. no jk. And I don't understand, should you just end 'what' where? :S The story, or the chapter? 'Cause I like where the chapter ended :D Hope you can sleep soon! And you'll be missed when you leave for three weeks ): |
TragedyDawl chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 lemon! hahaha do one more chapter so you would have 5 and have them make love and go out the end |
an idle teen chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 Don't end it . If there's gonna be alemon,no prob for me,the story is really great,maybe it would be even better with lemon :) Ja Ne Motajika-Chan :) |
K and Jazz chapter 3 . 8/11/2009 Randomness is good for the soul. : D Reactions: -_-, : , : P, and : D This chapter was great. Sasuke… why'd you let her walk away from the kiss? Helo, it's called rape. Especially mouth rape. XD Wow Sakura, shows what kind of girl you are. When he, like smelled you, you were totally ready to jump him. And now you back away like… a shy school girl. Tsk, tsk, tsk, what kind of girl are you? XD Yay, Sexual Orientation! I haven't read that in a while… I think. : ) Well… this was a good read after my second day of school. : } Update when you can! !(-KinkyK) |
nassima123 chapter 3 . 8/11/2009 yeah there gonna kiss |
doctorsnake chapter 3 . 8/11/2009 OHMY. Im in love with SASUKE here. :" Great chapter! :D Loved it! Update soon! :D :D |
Kanryu chapter 3 . 8/11/2009 I got cheated on in my first relationship / I didn't lose anything though, thankfully x_x Sasuke's making the first move! Oh my god! *hyperventilates* *ready for hot smoking kiss scene* and i don't think 2 weeks is THAT bad to get over a relationship...some things happen, so you can't really blame the person for wanting another relationship just 2 weeks after they broke up o: Update soon!~ |
TragedyDawl chapter 3 . 8/11/2009 oh Sakura is mean, I would had let him kiss her :) |