I just started reading today and I am absolutely OBSESSED. Your writing style is amazing, this story line is to die for, I NEED more! Keep up the amazing work

You are a great writer and I can't wait to read more of this story. This story has kept me on my toes this entire time, I was sad to realize I had made to to the last chapter written already. I look forward to reading more!

WOW things rlly took a turn, can we punish Ozai for breaking the rules tho, and damn SONG I hate this girl
BUT LIKE Poor Zuko this is a messed up situation now
Anyways AMAZING I NEED MORE

This is Iroh’s fault. He should have let Zuko protect Katara the way he wanted to. Katara can obviously defend herself but she would be executed if she fought against Ozai. I also like that Azula and Zuko are developing a stronger relationship. But yeah Iroh really messed up here.

There's always so much amazing content that I forget half of my review before I'm finished but it's amazing! I love Zuko and Ozai's confrontation and the type of man Ozai is just now realizing Zuko is. I was wondering what kind of effect being a normal soldier- rather than just sent on a journey for the avatar- had on Zuko. He seems much harder but not any less kind (or awkward lol). The amount of certainty and smugness Zuko had was great and that show of dominance was also great, though I did think Ozai was going to lash out (and he kinda did) because of it (like having plotting to have Azula take Zuko out). I also love the fact that Zuko hasn't killed Ozai out of respect for Iroh. I wonder how long ago Zuko would've done it if not for Iroh. Poor Katara, I do hope Zuko doesn't do anything too reckless.
Side notes: Azula has been quiet...too quiet lol. This reminds me a little bit of a story where someone was putting something in Ozai's tea/drink to drive him crazy so that someone would eventually overthrow him. I wonder what the robe Zuko almost grabbed leaving his father's room was about. Was it Song's? His mother? Since they are the JOINT water tribes, would Katara still be a princess or would only Yue hold that title?
With that, I'm finally caught up!

I now remember the obvious #4 (or was it 3?) that I knew last chapter! That Zuko was the one to save her (because who else could outrank Zhao and save an enemy's life and still be able to take them back to their own camp?) and that he had her necklace (when she saw that flash of blue around his wrist when they studied together or when he measured her (I can't remember which one). I forgot it in the shock of the "I COULDN'T LET HIM HAVE YOU!" moment.
Also, "she absently thinks she may have a problem" had me laughing. The chapter was hot and sweet all wrapped up into one.
Random, but I am a bit sad I can't remember the original story of yours so I could comment on how much better this one is but I love this story! I love your story!

Long, but amazing chapter! The music did help set the scene very well, especially the first one! I predicted that Ozai would win so it's a shock that Zuko did! (I'm assuming at least). Also, I was almost certain that Ozai was gonna use Katara to sneak attack Song away from Zuko for some reason but I did love that almost immediately he was like "fight me b****!* over Katara after her dance, which was very well described and great!
My predictions are
1. Jin will die. Random but I feel that she'll die and be part of Katara's (or even Zuko's character development) Or it will be the Madam.
2. Azula will play a part in it.
3. I had another one but it was lost in my reading of the chapter, lol. I'm excited to move on!

And Song appears! Lol. This was another great chapter! The chemistry is sizzling! And also, I winced when she cut herself and then the burning. You are so talented and descriptive!

All the interactions in this chapter are amazing! I love the Madam and everything else. I should've guessed it was Jet the moment she said she'd had sex already but he skipped my mind, lol. I'm excited to read more!

Ozai seems to be hot but so ewwwww. I love that we are seeing Katara's fire and love and all of that in these past few chapters

I'm excited for this new updated darker version!

I had such a shitty week at work and this really made me feel better! I tried different things to feel better and this was the best at getting me out of a bad mood. Thank you!

Normally I need a lot of Zutara scenes to care about a fic, but damn the Ozai drama was top notch. *chef’s kiss*

"You'll be the death of me Katara," Um, that better not be be foreshadowing lol

I happened to listen to “Never let me go” by Florence the Machine while reading part of the love scene, and it went so well.

Can’t wait for more! ~ Sandy

Thanks for another great smutty chapter! Loved it! x3

Zuko better white fire his ass and scar him right on the face like he did to him wen he was young

I just love this story. Your so good. Thank god for IROH if it wasn’t for him Zuko wouldn’t learn how to re direct lightning and saving Katara from ozai from his monster way. I really do hope Zuko is the best fire bender and Scarred ozai right in the face what comes around goes around