Good god. This is just so amazing and so so sad.

Wow, amazingly written. I didn't see that twist either. I'm still crying now. Just so depressing to imagine.

Wao. Just wao.

Wow... I did not expect that ending at all. Though I did find Gokudera and Yamamoto's constant staring weird- but I just chalked it up to... I don't know... surprise at Hibari getting wounded in the battle?
A part of me knew the dream held significance but I couldn't really point out how. My best bet was it was going to happen in the next mission or something.
Guess I was wrong about that *sigh*

This fic was amazing! The writing style of yours drew me in as soon as I started reading this . Although I adore happy endings, I found the tragic ending you put for this story an even better XD

I love it XD

This is a beautiful fic and you are a beautiful person for writing it. Thanks! 8)

It made it sounds intimate, the way Kyouya thinks to Dino using 'you'. About why Kyouya thinks that Dino's still alive, it's probably Mukuro's working. And as always, high and m,ighty Kyouya to never acknowledge another so openly. But him and Mukuro would really make a deadly duo in battle. They're both like, mighty strong.

Man, your last words, they damn near kill me! Thanks to you, my heart really hurts right now! I read KHR just because of this pair, and you kill one, left another having illusion?! Aaaaaa... I really hate you now ! And i hate for have to admit your writting is one of my favorite now (although it makes me feel super sad, which i don't really like at all)
keep your great job, but please no more tragic, pleaseeeeee!...

Oh my god, my HEART. -clutches- The ending was so painful to come to terms with. I had started to guess at where things were headed midway through(Either you had dropped some hints, or I imagined them).

I...I'm going to need some time to recover from this. This is probably one of my favorite pieces of D18 fanfiction.

omg i loved this. i actually cried a bit

Fucking god, that was so... So... It's amazing, seriously. It was so perfectly, so beautifully written, I am really amazed. Uh, also, I wanted to... Uh, you know, I wanted to try to translate it to my native language. So, un, I wanted to know if I can? ~

Oh wow. Hibari, for all his strength and violently antisocial nature, can really be a tragic character in the right circumstances. It was rather odd to read in 1st person POV for Hibari, simply because he's such a "mysterious" guy but I think you managed to pull it off pretty well. And oh so heart-wrenchingly. The style is gentle, very much so, and yet... In the end, Dino wasn't there at all. It's only until this fact is realized that the small discrepancies come to light. Like at the beginning where Dino somehow makes it to the door without Hibari noticing. Or how Hibari wakes up in the bed with no memory of how he got to there from the shower.

This fanfiction is probably the prettiest one I've ever read. It's like a storybook. It shouldn't be placed in Fanfiction. You write a whole lot better than other proffesional authors out there. Wow. You are officially one of my favourite authors. Wow.

I can't really say much, because I find this fanfic flawless. The story starts off peaceful, dreamy, and I think it stays like that throughout. The way it was written kept me in some bubble-like thing, where everything was perfectly quiet and peaceful and yet floaty. I have to learn how to write like that.

The ending is a bit like a sort-of rude awakening, although I had been suspecting that from the middle of the story onwards, including why Dino was never acknowledged by other people. And the quote really sums everything up.

If I had to use one word to describe this fanfic, I wouldn't really know, because it's angsty and yet fluffy and yet weird. So I would say it's very light/airy/something like that. I've never seen anyone write that sort of fanfics as well as you. Awesome job.

Oh my god. All my tears. ALL OF THEM.

This was beautiful; I can't stop tearing up ;A;

You can feel the love between them, and how heartbreaking it would be too loose each other. Oh my god I don't even know what too say.

Just.

Wow.

This is the most beautifully written story I have ever read. Putting aside my bias for D18, you have written this oneshot in such complexity and you have captured Hibari's feelings and attitudes so well that the ending made me cry. I would also like to mention how none of the plot reveals the ending and so it was almost completely unpredictable. I love surprise endings but this one was so sad and heartfelt that I must add this to my favourites XD

it's so touching :(( i love it :(((((