Reviews for Writing on the Wall
silvermyth chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
That was cute and steamy at the same time, go you! I liked the reference to scribbling on bathroom stall walls in HS. :D
Nexmajise chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
The ending made me laugh! This was very cute!
Penny S Lane chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
This was fantastic. Loved the way you captured this perfect moment. Perfectly erotic with their clothes still on.
caledon chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Extremely hot and highly delicious XD
SoRikuR0x chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Woah. I watched all ur youtube vids (the ones on Winrii's channel too) FREAKING AWESOME!
Ur probably the only guy Riku cosplayer I like. XD (OH! And Axel too!) And everyone else!
You're stories are so amazing!
This was so epic!
I shall await to see your stories in a bookstore! :D
Great job! Please make more SoRiku M rated stuff? Please?
itaessue chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
The first line. Hook, line and sinker. It's been awhile since I have read a good hook sentence in a fan fiction. I tend to cringe at AU high school fictions, but this one makes me rethink that they can sometimes be quite amazing. And putting them in high school was suiting in this sense. Their hormone raging curiosity, slipping out of class for a moment's release. This is so believable, I can't believe it's not part of the actual story plot. That was quite a story you sketched out. Bravo
coralreefs chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
THIS IS AMAZING. Seriously, freaking amazing. I'm so glad I found such an amazing RiSo fic, cause I've been in dire need of one.

Graphic and cute? I couldn't ask for more.

-Caitlin
Kreyana chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I have to say that I really loved that. You could practically smell the ocean, and feel a warm breeze and the shade! And reminded me of hearing those pool gym classes, both in high school and college.

Thank you very much for sharing this! Wonderfully done.
Grellexiting chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
OMFG. THE FLUFF. This is possibly one of the most adorable things I've read in a while. Sexy, smutty and overall dirty (the way I like it ;D), yes, but it's adorable.

Seen your photo on dA btw, connected to this thing. I can't believe you actually did that? xD
Raexneol chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Perfect and amazing and so, so hot. I loved this.
LovesickPanda chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
OMG that was AWESOME lol I LOVE the end. and I'm still laughing! :D :3
Jayden Winters chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I really enjoyed reading this! I'm so happy that I stumbled across it. Thank you for writing such a believable and awesome fanfic. You're quite talented!

Jayden
S.RAYN chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I love this story, its so funny but so intimate at the same time. :)
forty five chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Go Riku. Aha.

I simply adore your writing style; the detail and wording and characterization (just everything, actually) is flawless and alluring. Very nice to read, and enjoyable - not excessively wordy or droning, so it's not a bore to read.

Simply fantastic 3
Airway Static chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Yay for Riku~ Good job on this.
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