Nice story! I haven't see many Sanji taking Luffy's pain stories. Actually this is like the second story. It was good though! Sanji really wanted Zoro to just go back. I liked how you put him there when he'd gotten shocked by Enel (makes it more realistic) and added Kuina.

I really would love to see the epilogue but more than that, I think you should focus one chapter on the crew's reactions when Sanji died and Zoro was dying and when both of them were revived. I think it would make for a pretty emotional scene. The story was wonderfully done and in character.

That was great!

There isn't enough Sanji and Zoro nakamaship around, so I'm glad that you wrote it.

Keep up the great work!

I CRIED A RIVVEER *sob* T_T .. and stil am

NEVER DIE AGAIN YOU ASS HOLES T_T

and when kuina appeard it was so heart warmming

the story is pure awsomeness thank you keep it up

Wow, this was seriously amazing, i loved this so much, totaly going on my favs!

Keep up the great writing! XD

~AHWH~

Its stupid how you Sanji fans try to put him on equal with Zoro

like your jealous or something

but other than that your writing is good

Bye now

Aw, how sweet! But sad at the same time! I was really afraid that Sanji was going to stay dead! But leave it to Zoro to drag him back to the land of the living even if he doesn't want to go! XP

Really good job with keeping everyone in character! It was JUST like Zoro to not even think a second about shortening his life for Sanji. 0 Their interactions were played out very well!

The story itself was a really interesting idea! Something that, I think, could've happened in the series!

An Epilogue would be really cool, if you ever got around to it! Great story! I really loved it! Go Zoro/Sanji Nakamaship! :D

Epilogue! Now! I mean, er, please?

This was a wonderful friendship fic and I'd love to see more.

PLEASE.

ps, is this sort of Sanji/Nami? Just the way you wrote her reaction to his death sorta mae it seem that way.

You should do another bit, where Sanji really did die.

*sniff* That was a good story, diving into their emotions on what would happen if the two were on the edge of life and death. When Sanji and Zoro were in that dark abyss room, I was half expecting Yuuko from xHolic to show up XD (maybe put her in as a cameo?) When Sanji was zapped by Enel, I assume that he ended on the white side of the place? Anyway, good job!

OOH. Epilogue! Yes plz! c:

Yay~! Sanji's alive~! 8D

I like any story that shows Sanji more of a hero than Zoro or at least at the same par. :D

Update soon~!

Aww! That was... so beautiful! *sniff sniff*

I loved it! When Kuina showed up I did a little happy dance. And yay for Sanji living! The condition was so appropriate, and OF COURSE Zoro would do it in a heartbeat. He's so great like that!

I like this ending, and an epilogue would be great, I'm sure, but I know I don't want to read the not-so-happy ending, because that probably means someone's gonna die... T_T

Aw... You make me blush. ** Thank you! Really? That would be so cool!

Omg, that was unbearably sad. Sanji! There are tears in my eyes. I can just imagine Zoro waking up and being like, "No, Sanji can't be dead I was just SPEAKING to him. He's right THERE."

Aw, please update soon!

*tear tear* sad please update soon

Very sad story! You wrote in such a convincing way! No~ Sanji was dead in replace of Zoro...