Just got here, but I’m digging this story! Would love to see more if you plan on updating! Bravo!

It's too bad this story was abandoned its a really good plot and is very well written. It especially sucks that this story was abandoned before Chuck was introduced to Sarah. It's crazy how similar it is to the finale with Sarah losing her memories. If you ever happen to visit this site again and you read this, you should definitely finish this story. There are still quite a few readers of Chuck fan fiction.

Please continue with the story!

Well I'm not the hundredth, but I would like to write that chapter with Casey you promised at the end... oh, come on, we both know you aren't going to write Chuck in yet, that is if you ever continue this amazing story, I also loved both your one-shots, especially about the camera man at the dodger game, now I know you said this story is on Hiatus but don't be like Wep and pull a college years on me, he left it a very emotional part, and I am very angry about the fact that he has given up, but you can continue, this is a great story, and I hope you either continue it, or start a new project, even another one-shot, something to get the creative juices flowing you know?

Are you going to finish this?

Awww...it's awesome! I can't wait for more!

This story is just so good please update sometime soon...

great story. I can't wait for the next chapter

Really curious about where you going with this. i like the slow burn that the story has and bringing Jack back was a nice touch. Can't wait for the next instalment!

Very nice story. There must be something going on that Chuck is doing that he needs to keep Sarah safe from, or I can't imagine him not being by her side going through this. I hope you update soon, looking forward to the next chapter.

so i love you.

with your musical

and now TRUE BLOOD

references.

yuhp. ;D

much love

aby

I admit it. I'm totally impatient and couldn't wait for you to post on lj. You may flog me now. ;-)

This was an amazing chapter, hon. It almost had me in tears, especially the "Lisa" line. I loved the backstory. You did a great job creating Lisa. She reminded me a lot of Sarah. And the scene where she realized that Chuck had saved her was incredible.

I'm looking forward to the Casey chapter, and I can't wait for you to bring in Chuck. Such a great story! Awesome work, Yok.

I don't know how the backstory of Sarah's mom could have been more tragic, but it does explain a lot with Sarah, doesn't it ;)

I wonder how Chuck is going to be able to defend his argument for not visiting her by now...? That will be an interesting conversation.

You are doing very well with each character-visitor - Looking forward to the next. Thanks!

Hmm...and here I thought you couldn't like me anymore. Oh well, you never cease to amaze me, Yok! Great chapter, and the backstory about Sarah's dad was really quite good, and I like how you kind of relate that to the Chuck/Sarah story. Well done, and thank you for sharing! )

Sad but good none the less. Thinks it's the first time I've read about Sarah's mother so it was interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Happy birthday!