| Reviews for Carousel |
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Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 12/6/2017 Ahhh. Lovely, I can picture that carousel so perfectly. It's beautiful in my mind :) LOL And Alvida, now that she's thin, she's gonna use her new found sex appeal to get a discount! |
Punitor567 chapter 9 . 3/21/2016 ... I am both pleasantly surprised that this fic exists and utterly astonished at HOW UNDERRATED THIS FIC IS WHAT KIND OF INJUSTICE - ahem. What I mean is, this little thing deserves quite a lot more than just freaking 17 favorites. Seriously. I mean, it's on TVTropes for a reason. Really well written. I could see the whole past meeting twist coming because that's a device nearly every odd couple shipping fic uses at some point, and if I have any complaints it's this: the ending just felt slightly abrupt and rushed. Also, Alvida is slightly OOC. But that aside, this is pretty good. Great job. |
jonjames427 chapter 9 . 5/12/2013 I think its fitting that the only man with a pair of balls and a brain in his head gets the "most beautiful woman on the seas". |
Seychelles chapter 9 . 4/30/2013 ...It seems I have a new favorite One Piece pairing this should fit and 4 between Frobin and SoNa |
Happy Feather chapter 9 . 1/22/2013 This was very sweet. I think it may have gotten more attention as a one-shot rather than a multi chaptered fic. The pairing isn't popular so people may be turned off reading it by the length and the wait for updates. A one-shot though would have kept their attention the whole time. Love the idea that Alvida was enchanted by the beauty and wonder of a carnival like any other little girl. |
FishTetris chapter 9 . 7/5/2012 As usual, the TV Tropes recommendations are reliable. Usually, the One Piece fics I read are Strawhat-centric, but this one was super charming and unique! I guess we never stop much to think about most of the other characters, let alone the villains. I think it's nice that you gave Cabaji and Alvida personalities, and I especially like the backstory you invented for Alvida. Loved the interactions with her mom-her mom having her own nice characterization, too. Husky and somewhat stern, but fair. I liked that she let the sugar slide when she saw Alvida running off to the pasture Nice little twist, too, with Cabaji being the boy at the circus. It might seem a bit cliche to some, but darnit, it was cute! Anyways, thanks for supporting characters that nobody pays much attention to! It was quite refreshing to read a story starring someone other than the Strawhat crew. This definitely deserves to be on the Tropes recommendations list c: |
Lady Emzebel chapter 9 . 12/19/2009 I got the reference right at the beginning of this last chapter. I'm so pleased. :3 At first I thought it was Bon Clay when his sisters tackled him and tried putting makeup on him and doing his hair, but then you kept bringing him up so I knew he was more important than that. I like the relationship between Alvida and her mother. It makes me wonder what possibly could have happened to turn Alvida from a pleasant young girl to a vicious, club-weilding pirate. But I suppose most One Piece characters do seem that way at first (I remember the good ol' days when I though Buggy was scary XD and Krieg.) and then you discover they're human too. I think it's horribly unfair that this story didn't get as much attention as it deserved just because of the pairing. As it is, I think it's quite a nice pairing. Sure, the main character pairings are good, but sometimes you get sick of reading so much about them. This is a refreshing change. I'll be sure to add this pairing to my favourites. The grammar and spelling was great (which is always a plus because bad mechanics in a story just detracts from the whole thing) and the chapters were a good length, easy to read, and over all stuffed with fluffy goodness. This was very deserving of the award it received. I think the best thing about this fic is that I can actually picture in my head like an anime episode. It fits in very well with what Oda does for each of his charaters: having their flashbacks periodically interrupted by real life. Banzai! L.E |
Capn Nat chapter 9 . 10/20/2009 Aw, cute ending! It tied the rest of the story together quite well And uys officail uve made me a fan of cabxalv |
Capn Nat chapter 8 . 10/20/2009 Haha, I knew it! I did pick up the second hint I just wanted 2 make sur first! Cabajilittle carousel boy Btw, I'm really enjoying ur story, I never heard of this pairing till now but uve made me fall in love with it! There r spelling errors here and there but despite ur stories well written and flows nicely |
AegisLove7 chapter 9 . 9/6/2009 BRVO! BRAVISSIMO! Beautiful Story! There should be more stories with with pairing! It was all very well done,cute and heartwarming. But, there is one thing you should know. Miss Valentine's isnt really named "Miss Valentine". That was her Alias for Baroque Works and I dont think she was called that before that point. But that's So minor that even I dont mind it. |
laurexine flight chapter 9 . 9/5/2009 aww, i cried at the end it was so sweet and lovely! this was a very beautiful story, and now without any doubt i am an AlxCa fan. thank you! |
MonkeyGurl chapter 9 . 9/4/2009 *Happy fan girl squeel* Nya! This was so swet! I really enjoyed this story, read the hole thing in one sitting so to say, just lovely! You can throw AxC at me anyday! C: |
UsopppLover4Ever chapter 9 . 9/4/2009 AW! |
UsopppLover4Ever chapter 3 . 9/4/2009 Cabaji and Alvida sittin in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! XD...I like this though I think Buggy and Alvida would be better but *shrugs self consiously* that's me and my weird mind... |
laurexine flight chapter 8 . 9/1/2009 OH MY GOD... OH WOW... (i didn't get any of the hints, but i really wasnt expecting this!) keep posting please! |