love it

Update soon please

Loved the story line and plot, but felt it was a little rushed. Felt like it only took days, whe nit should have been at least months.

I didn't like the overall story or how it ended,it began with a good vibe but then once she met Dom things just went to hell

You took him completely out of character and made him a sensitive wimp,he screws her on the second night then proposes on the third...completely unbelievable

I like your mafia princess deal,that was a good twist

and the other junk that was good too,except that how the hell would Brian be considered a good kid?

He got two years in juvy for stealing cars,usually that means that by psychology,their parent's weren't good parents and probably didn't pay too much attension to them.

momma's boy dosn't join street gangs.

Lastly,your grammar was very atrocious...you may wanna run stuff through spellchecker before putting it down on here.

Aw... Dom found love again...

I love it! Keep it going! ;)