Are you going to post another chapter? I'll die without another chapter because this is awesome. Great writing! Sorry if I sound like a prissy suck-up too it's just that this is a good story.

That is cool. What happen next?

Yes! A chapter! Now to wait for the next one...

I like the details you put into everything :O

It makes it a lot easier to understand and such...Poor Maria ):

She's all terrified and has her kingdom's impending revolt to worry about.

Ah I should tell you C:

My old penanme was mo1234etc.

I finally got sick of it and changed it :'D

Rose is so my favorite xD spewing violent profanities,being sarcastic and being dramatic. Ah Sea-prince ahoy :O he's nice so far i kind of like him :D

Enough babbling Good chapter!

Hey! Wow, is it 23 chapters already? They've really added up. Glad to see you're still writing and you've made improvements. As soon as I saw the description for the prince, I was like, "Wait... Is that Hippo?" Then when he was introduced as Prince Silo, I thought, "Wait, like, the thing that holds a ton of grain on a farm?" XD I like the prince and I hope Maria gets over her boy problems. ;)

~A-sama

Only problem - keep your verb tenses all past tense, all future tense, or all present tense. :)

I like Eris xD

he's so...Strange xD

MY WALLS D8

I can just picture that xD

Clair is a snot who needs a slap..from Maria 8D

my unhelpful review is over xD

Hmm, I like Eris, wonder if we'll see him again (;

Definitely loved those two chapters, the whole ordeal with Clair and Galicia was really well done, I'll be looking forward to more 8D

Yay, two new chapters! This really clears up the Bad guy's motivations.

Something is seriously wrong with Clair. What happened in her childhood that caused her to act like that?

Anyway, good chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

I don't see how Rihito Licht it would be closer to then English light, and you spelled both Rihito and Licht wrong.

But in any case I'm still really liking this!

Oh before I forget, I do believe that using Aqua Marina is wrong. Aqua Regina is latin, Aqua being water and Regina being queen, so I think what Pink Hanamori and Michiko Yokote meant was Ocean Queen. Therefore Aqua Regina would be the title so it wouldn't be Aqua Luchia or Aqua Marina, if anything it would be Luchia Regina. Also I do think that as the Ocean Goddess Aqua Regina, or Aqua Luchia/Luchia Regina wouldn't be limited by a human lifespan either, not that I mind this Regina not being Luchia.

Wow you've really got me hooked on this. Your writing is very good, definitely better than most mermaid melody fanfics I've *tried to* read so props for that! You should really link those pictures you were talking about because I know from experience that describing those idol outfits never really gets the true point across xD Plus it's nice to have a visual.

Then again I'm only at chapter 7 so who knows if you've already done so. In any case I'm looking forward to another couple hours worth of reading and mourning the time when I will come to the end of the updated chapters. Do keep writing!

It's youuuuuuuuu. It's been foreeeeeeevz. :) What took ya so long? (I do take at least half a year to write a chapter hehe) How many pages did this chapter end up being? It's super long. O_O

~M-12

Yay! Umi's back! I love Umi!

Thank you for updating!