| Reviews for After the End |
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Selena92 chapter 17 . 8/8 Awesome! I love this so much! You wrote a believable and very satisfying continuation. First, Toushirou and Momo: I love those two together. They're so sweet. Momo deserves the captaincy and she has a great Bankai. I love how Toushirou supported and trained with her and that you even featured their granny! Especially satisfying to see those bullies feel properly ashamed of themselves. Or well, at least be in awe of Toushi-chan. I'm especially happy with Tasukichi and Ayumi, who apologized. That dinner was awesome though. I also like Toushirou's transformation and that he still is exceptionally strong. I mean, no "oh wait, Ichigo and Kenpachi and Yamamoto are actually stronger and Toushirou's really weak now". I love it. I'm so delighted how you solved the Ulquiorra and Nel situation! I love those two. And Gin being forgiven is great too, especially for Matsumoto. Then you even brought Hisana back and in such a great way too. I actually expected poor Byakuya to break down sobbing or even collapse in a dead faint. Fate really was exceptionally cruel to him, it's so great he finally got something. I love those two. For me, it's either ByaHisa/HisaBya or RenBya. I also love Hisana's Zanpakutoh. So happy you didn't do IchiHime! I am an avid IchiRuki fan so you've nade me very happy here. Poor Kira and Renji though, both losing their love interest. They are great guys, not trying to destroy true love though. I'm so glad that Rukia could finally become Lieutnant and that you showed how scared Bya is of loosing her. Did I mention I love him? I'm looking forward to the sequel! In the meantime, I'll be reading Heavenly Blade ;-) |
Frozen Meatballs chapter 12 . 2/1/2015 I absolutely adore your Heavenly Guardian plot here along with the Heavenly Blade and Final Battles but I decided to review here on this story and on this chapter because what amused me more than the actual Heavenly Guardian is the interactions between Hyourinmaru and Tobiume and their Tobiume-a-Phoenix issue is simply the best xD I rather ship them though not so cheesy shipping with all the I love yous and kissing of Hitsugaya and Hinamori. More of the teasing side but a few hints of romance. To be honest, this has been my third time to read all three of them and only reviewed now because, you know, third time's the charm *shot* I'm kind of hoping for a Hyou and Tobi centric perspective of this (or something else) but I'm sure my wish would not be granted. Kudos to you! |
aRandomPeople chapter 17 . 5/6/2014 I don't usually read stories with the main plot being centered around the character's feelings and romances... but I have to say. I Loved This Fic soooo much! |
Durbe the Barian chapter 17 . 3/21/2014 How beautiful. Even the HitsuHina was adorable! (Don't worry, Karin. I'm not writing it.) Great story/novel/whatever-awesomness this was. It was totally worth the read. :) |
Durbe the Barian chapter 15 . 3/20/2014 That...was...[speechless] |
Durbe the Barian chapter 14 . 3/20/2014 ULQUIORRA! XD NEL! You're alive! (Random quesiton: Is Nel in her child form or adult form?) Cool Zanpakuto for Hisana. I'd love seeing something like THAT in action. |
Durbe the Barian chapter 10 . 3/18/2014 I KNEW IT! IT WAS HISANA! XD GO GET HER, BYAKUYA! XD That fight...was absolutely amazing! Totally worth it. |
Durbe the Barian chapter 9 . 3/18/2014 I have GOT to read this fight. Please excuse me. |
AmunRa chapter 17 . 6/1/2013 Good story. It was well-written and had good character development. It's good to see them have a happy ending for a change. |
AmunRa chapter 7 . 5/6/2013 Hmm... I'm not into romance, as it tends to complicate things way too much and authors have a tendency to focus on that instead of the plot. I also dislike Hinamori and wanted Hitsugaya to not forgive her. I'm still curious to see if the manga will ever actually resolve the issues with these two. But, I've enjoyed the heavenly guardian part of the story. You write Hitsugaya really well and I've liked how you've written the transformation. As tempted as I am to stop reading, I think I'll continue for a bit and see what you do with these two. I can be persuaded to like them if the story is compelling enough. |
icyangel27 chapter 17 . 4/18/2013 Aww Ichigo and Rukia got together! Their little confession an kiss is so cute XD Wish I could have seen a little more Hitsuhina though :/ XD Please write more Hitsuhina fics please! :) PCE |
gohanismegacute chapter 17 . 1/28/2013 I really enjoyed reading this - it had a nice balance between characters, action, romance etc. and I thought is was rather well written. Good job - I'll be on the look out for more of your stories. |
MonsterWaterWolf5 chapter 17 . 1/25/2013 That very good! |
SlopDoggy chapter 17 . 1/23/2013 *sniff. sniff sniff* Such a sweet chapter. And I agree. Poor Ichigo. Though Hisana may mellow Byakuya out some. :P And if you do have problems in real life, you can always send me a message. I'm always gonna be here for ya. :) And if you want, I can give you my cell number so you can text me whenever too. :D |
Furionknight chapter 17 . 1/23/2013 :) |