I am disappointed that there was no Edward and Bella married. Not to mention no romance showing between them with dates and such. It was all about Jasper and Emmett and I'm happy for them but where's Edward and Bella?

I’m really about to stop reading if I don’t see some Bella and Edward soon... Jasper is seriously pissing me off and poor Emmett

Emmett is too funny... Every chapter I’m laughing hard

Am I the only one that cried from laughing so hard... Hilarious

Enjoyed this funny story! Also feels oddly prescient since KStew is in the new Charlie’s Angels reboot. Good call!

Oh my goodness... how on earth is this even gonna work out? Like, three near psychotically obsessed guys lusting after girls they’ve never spoken to or met? I mean, we all know that they belong together but taking it objectively, from a non-biased standpoint, that shit’s creepy AF.

Lolololol Henry Painter lololololol :D your killing me with these fake movie names

it was a gud plot...but not enough bella and edward seems like pathetic human being...it turns it off for me..gud idea abt d plot but i dont do jasper and alice fanfictions

it was a gud plot...but not enough bella and edward seems like pathetic human being...it turns it off for me..gud idea abt d plot

AWESOME! story ;) but i did wish that there was more Edward and Bella and that they had gotten married as well and before Emmett and Rosalie had ;) i did think that this was the best Alice i had ever read though ;) thanks for sharing it with us ;D

This was just slightly an Edward/ Bella story. It was really good but not enough E&B.

I know it's not still your birthday but I wish all of your birthdays would be happy.
Second time I've read the story and loving it just as much this time around.

Hey ladies, this was an amazingly funny story! I know it's been years since you wrote it but it's still golden. I have to say - as well documented as the progression was in the relationships with A/J and E/R, I was disappointed that the Edward and Bella part of the story line was not equally developed. When they finally got together their whole part of the story just faded to black. Being an E/B reader, I kept reading and reading hoping they would get more time and even in the epilogue they weren't together. *sad*

Anyway, it was lots of fun to read.
Kat

Not that I was before but am definitely not Team Jasper. 9 months into a relationship with Alice and still not talking. Why not get his own apartment then? Flat out lying does not make you a good friend.

To quote your Emmett: 'just sayin'.

I don't know if you can throw out the phrase were like brothers, live in their house, want me to share all yet keep them in the dark yet her friends all know. That's fucked!