Very good chapter. Astrong beggining and worthwhile setup.

Why is the MC such a weak fuck? Like, why is the story making him into a complete fucking failure?

I love Itachi and love this storyyy

I love this storyyy

After reading fanfiction without an account for several years - this one convinced me to make one so I could favorite it. I realize it's almost 10 years old at this point - but I truly enjoyed reading this. Congrats.

I'm not crying. This is just… Naruto cutting onions… yes… onions.

THIS WAS AWESOME!

"I love passing out..."
Yeah me too.

Oh my god it’s so weird to see how people think Itachi killed Shisui from before we knew. Oh my god this was so weird to read. I feel like I’m in middle school again this is so nostalgic!

oh god this is sad

"Then who are you?"
An evil son of a gun.

Actions are still actions. He’s still capable of man slaughter because he’s had experience doing it. That doesn’t go away.

ah now i understand what this monster is. it was madara! thankyou for the story

i dont... really understand what's going on..
so big itachi is using young itachi? but for what purpose?
uchiha family is way to complicated. when i read uchiha's story in manga i felt this family was beyond saving.

Oh. My. God. This is such a deep story! I know you probably won’t read this because it came out in 2010 but I wanna say that that was really deep and nobody has really put that much thought into Itachi’s mental stability and the fact that he’s only 13! Love the itachi and sasuke brotherly relationship and that Shisui doesn’t die. The structure, the way you presented things, This. Is a work of Art.

Thank u for this beautiful story. M not good with words.
It was one of the best stories I hv read in a long time.
Atleast in these stories itachi gets a better ending & sasuke gets to b with his nii san.
I cried buckets while reading it.
U did an amazing job.