I really love this story, although it trips me up when you use being instead of been. The story itself is beautiful however, and I look forward to whatever more you write!

Nice writing style.

I'm really enjoying this one; you write very well. Please update :)

I don't know if I like Elphaba in this mood she's in. She's rather...mean wouldn't you say? Though Glinda's having her fair share of annoying moments...generally it's a rather even balance :P

Despite what I have just said I actually rather like this story. It's new, refreshing and unpredicatble.

*Voice over* What will happen now? Will Elphaba's condition deteriorate? Is there any hope of Gelphie love or is it a painful twist of friendship highly strung? Find out this, and so much more in the next thrilling chapter...

Maybe I should pick a different carreer path ;D

Anyway, stay safe

Grumbello

Ok, I've been waiting since you replied to my review of the last chapter about two weeks ago to say this...

You are not a sad person.

Yes that was a bit small for waiting so long but I wanted to prove a point.

That was marvelous! I got a bit lost in some points but I think that might have something to do with me being awake at twelve thirty in the morning whist really tired.

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

I've finally realised that the emotions I get whilst reading this story are sad. This an extreamly sad story and this chapter was even more sad! How do you make an extreamly sad story more sad? I didn't think you could do it, but you did it. *Applause* Well done.

Honestly that was a terribly sad chapter and a terribly sad way to end a chapter and just so I can say terribly one more time, it was a terribly well written chapter ;)

Frex is dead...I should feel slightly happy about that but the way you wrote it made me almost regret his death. But please, make Elphie a little nicer soon...her anger is killing me *pouts* Pwease?

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

Ha...could not stop laughing at that little AN note:

'And Throbb… :P Maybe it was my charming upbeat disposition. Couldn’t stand to see a sad b.'

It's alright mate, you don't need to reply to this review...I know you take them with an open mind so that's all I need to know.

I really liked this chapter...you've started to elongate the chapters which is very exciting...though Elphie makes me sad. I don't know if I like her this angry, but then again, I didn't really like her anger in the book either (but I loved that and I love this) so really, it's a lose/win situation :P

It was nice to have another chapter up so soon too. Quick updates, gotta love em'. :)

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

well for a bitchy chapter you did mighty well for yourself mate...

Once again, fantastic story...you may want to be carefull though with Shell's last name at the start of the Chapter "Shell Throbb" instead of "Shell Thropp" But it is a simple mistake to make...bloody typo's always getting to ya one way or the other... :D

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

it's gettin awesomer...i love going to my e-mail finding an alert that there's a new chap. it's like christmas in the summer. your writing is awesome, but you wrote Throbb instead of Thropp. and some other words have also been miswritten and i'm not sure if it's intended or typos. but above it all this chap was great.

Wow, I probably shouldn't have read this whilst I was exhausted because the writing was so intricate and detailed and I was lost :P I will reread it but I managed to absorb enough to know that this was well written and very...poetic in a non poetic way ...I told you I was tired :D

If you can understand what I mean you are smarter than I... :)

Another wonderful chapter

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

it's going great. i'm loving the bickering between the Foenix and Glinda it makes the story fun as well as the comical relationship between Glinda and Chistery. but the importatnt question is, is this a friendship fic or a Gelphie slash fic. it doesn't really matter to me but the not knowing is keeping at the edge of my seat... will continue to read for sure.

This is really good! Please continue! I've always wanted for Elphie to live...The book always made me so sad! I can't WAIT for more! :)

Well...I must say this was interesting and rather good. I liked it mate...not bad at all.

Just a heads up, in a friendly and not a patronizing tone at all, Elphi is actually spelt Elphie...but hey it was one e at the end of a name, no big deal really. I just thought I'd point it out.

Now, is there hopes for this to continue? Cause I'm willing to read it *hint hint* :D

I really liked how chapter three ended with Elphaba saying:

"You should have let me die..." Very powerful stuff.

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

really great. loving it. you've managed to follow the book and the writing. that's a pretty difficult task and you've accomplished it. one thing though, i don't know if you wrote it on purpose or not but Elphaba called Nanny, 'Nanna' in the first chapter. well i will be waiting for more.