| Reviews for Piccolo |
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ZZ chapter 3 . 3/16/2015 LOOOVE THESE DRABBLES HOLY CRAP. |
Chem-Death chapter 1 . 3/22/2014 Most boys dreamed of being King. For Gohan, I bet it's home, safe, comfort, Piccolo, Mommy, and scholar (not in this order). |
Chem-Death chapter 2 . 3/22/2014 Wow, Goku acknowledged something Piccolo's good at. So, it's Gohan and Goten down there? |
Chem-Death chapter 3 . 3/22/2014 ...pfft. The last line made me giggle. At least, Namekian babies are not as bad as a human's or Saiyan's. He should have a son! Damn story line not giving him one! It'll be a nice contrast! ... I have nothing against Saiyans, it's just they're the only thing I see in DBZ. Really annoying when I like Namekians more. |
larissa5150 chapter 3 . 11/28/2013 That was such a cute story aww piccolo being a daddy that's awsome i wish someone would make a story like that! |
Misty Blue chapter 3 . 9/13/2013 Oh... wow, just... wow! Haha! |
Misty Blue chapter 2 . 9/13/2013 Oh, I simply could not agree with you more on this. Really! Perfect chapter here! |
Misty Blue chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 Ah, indeed. It all stemmed from the first Piccolo. Hey, great chapter! All so true. Love this! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2013 Awww |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2012 It was good but in chapter 3 when you talk about goten you forgot at |
Haphazard Snow chapter 3 . 3/9/2012 Loved this. I really like what you've done with this. You really captured Piccolo's character. Keep up the great work! |
meganechan720 chapter 3 . 2/11/2012 I really like the last chapter, especially the title. Piccolo feeling his biological clock, so to speak, is sweet and giggle-worthy. |
CloakSky chapter 1 . 9/8/2011 Oh, I've just come up some Piccolo drabble ideas! How about one with thoughts of Piccolo Daimao (I think the american version calls hims "The Demon King Piccolo"), while he was imprisoned for about 3 centuries, or one with Piccolo's thoughts of Gohan when he's about to get married, with a new round of Goku/Piccolo rivalry! And you can go till the last tournament of DBZ and everything! Oh my, I have so many ideas, I think I'm going to do a Piccolo Drabble thing, too xD And then we can compare our versions! DDD By the way, I really miss you as my beta reader. You haven't been for very long but you were definitely the best of all those I've had up to now. Texaspeach (who co-owns OrangeStarLove with me on DA) is going to help me from now on, but you've really helped me improve the quality of my stories' writing and your corrections and notes made me progress in English significantly ans really quickly, too (I'm a fast learned and have a memory of elephant. I really do, lol). I love texaspeach's writing style and her way of writing GohanVidel romance fics, too, but you're one of the only author that I can really enjoy reading a fanfiction about any DBZ character or pairing (read Voyeur the last night...morning...ish lol, but I was too exhauted to review ;;; I'm going to, now. I've got much to say about that small little one-shot ) Well, I'll see you there, then! :D |
CloakSky chapter 3 . 9/7/2011 Hahahahahahaha~! The first drabble is the funniest story I've ever read on Piccolo! XD I love your sense of humor xDDD The first one was sweet, with the thoughts of Piccolo on his dreams before he met Gohan and Goku died. At the last sentense I was thinking "Gohan is probably dreaming about being as strong as his daddy", but now I think he'd just dream about food xDDD Or Chichi's cooking, lol P The second is more serious, but I liked it all the same, especially the Goku/Picclo rivalry on being a better dad for Gohan. It makes us understand Goku's POV and the fact that he isn't a bad father on purpose, it's just the way he is and he'd like to change and become a better dad for his sons. Which is really what I think of Goku's parent issues. Great job on those drabbles, I hope you'll have some more ideas soon |
SnowLion no Miko chapter 3 . 11/26/2009 Wow I really loved this! I hope you post another drabble soon. I really like your take on Piccolo. He is one of my favorite characters in the series and you write him very well. Amazing work! |