Reviews for FatherSon Rivalry
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
minatochan2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
x3 So fluffehhhhhh. I thought it might not be good since it was such a short fic but dang, you just proved me wrong. Very cute excerpt from what could have been...TT-TT
monkey kix ass chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
kawaii! thanks for sharing your story.
Random Person chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
This is sweet, real sweet. I love it, especially the ramen part.
thekspecialty chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Very funny and adorable all at the same time I really wish Minato hadn't died :( He would have been such an awesome dad :)
As Darkness Takes Over chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Aww that was really really(and so on a tausen times) cute. I'm so glad someone decids to make happy moment between father and son
spirited curiosities chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
That's absolutely adorable! TT-TT I really wish that Naruto's dad didn't die, 'cause this fic just makes their relationship even cuter and sadder because Naruto doesn't have his daddy...but still, it was a very beautiful story!

Awesome job and keep up the great writing!
Timeless Illusion chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Awh! Naru-chan is soo cute! -squeal-
juls-emo chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
omg. that was so extremly sweet like sugar!

i loved it was like jumping up and down on my chair for exitment! i love minato he is like a sugar daddy .. xD

and naru-chan is so cute!

go on with the good work

gotta add it to my favs

greets
Lakrahe chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
ahhww how cute.. a father's love for his son
Kin-Ryu Chikara chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
This was some of the most adorable stories I have read! I smiled so much while reading this, it was so sweet I almost got a sugar high.

If you have more stories like this, please post them! The world needs more fluff and aww-moments!
vegemaru chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Oh that was too cute!

Naru-chan oh naru-chan! That was so cute!
Lazuliblur chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Oh, that was too sweet!~

Thank you for sharing, I loved it.