Loved that

I wish there was another chapter! Best story ever!

I love this but i feel SHAME reading this

I don't ship this. But that ending xD.

Great writing though!

I know Im super late to review this, but your omeshot was super hot

mORE

Oh man
I love this
Sooooooooo much
Sequel please?

"AHYESGARYYY!"
how I imagined it:
"AHGHES- *gargle* EHHY!"

So hot... Now I'm going to try find Jimmy x Gary. dx

With mention to "a gift" so often that would probs be a better title.

So immediately after finally banging, they have a couple's quarrel? AND OH MAH MONKEY BALLZ PRAIS THE LAWD IVE FOUND THE BEST YAOI LEMON IN THE ENTIRE !

Haha. Yay! I love this so much dude! :D thanks for sharing your awesome yaoi skills with the world dear :)

I love it

This was absolutely amazing. And I don't say that jokingly. You captured their personalities to a T. You have a fantastic, flowing writing style that kept me wanting to finish the entire way through. I honestly cannot say the last time I've read a fanfiction as well written as this was. Bravo!

Fuck! you have to make more gary and petey! O.O please for the love of god make more of this! oh my god it was amazing! PLEEEAASEEE!

btw they was sooooo hot! i lost it as soon as gary started stripping.