Loved the Mary Sue test. I'm glad she won't feel useless any more. I just have some reservations since when Prowl and Jazz are involved with an OC, they have the tendency to "share" her.

Woot! Sunfall has a job now!

A~nd Prowl continues to be sexy. :3

Sorry I don't have much more constructive to say.

Hmm .. sharpshooter, lethal at hand-to-hand, AND going into Special Ops after only a year .. does that count as Mary Sue-ish?

Aww, I'm just teasing :) I really got a kick out the Mary Sue test. I LOVE these stories, and am thrilled to see the updates! Please do keep them coming :-)

(at your own pace, of course)

yeah sunfall gets a job

prowl is being very protective

aw so nice

i love them kissing

lol a lap dance im sure prowl loved that

D'aw. Fidgety Prowl here makes a cute Prowl! :D

Heh, kinda makes me regret dropping the piano (I got fed up during high school).

lol shes on drugs alright

prowl seems to be taking everything well

Aw, that's so sweet. I really like the chemistry between the two of them. Why was Sunfall in a battle? Bad luck?