Great job please continue

How could you abandon this? How?!

I just found the story today and I really like it! My only suggestion would be to have maybe a little more dialogue. Please don't give up on the story, as I would like to see the third hokage's reaction to the death of team 10

Interesting

love the hinata bashing

Persona 4 reference! :D

Story seems childish already. In truth despite the unrealistic storyline which didn't really bother me, I just can't stand reading a fic that has unnecessary bashing of key characters for no apparent reason apart from some childish dislike of the character from the anime/manga. Sakura being called 'Suckura' was where I read to and I don't see the point to read further as so far you've just been making stupid background stories and names for character which you don't like (which seems to be the majority of Konoha's shinobi). Not only that but there is no reason behind it mainly, just to inform you, if a kid dresses in a horrible orange outfit (and is unbelievably loud and stupid) and is trying to be a shinobi, he is going to be made fun of and deserves it and he also probably deserves to get hit by his teammates/classmates who have to put up with him. There are so many problems with this fic, I won't list them, you probably know them, but don't think of them as issues. To shorten it, making Naruto impossibly powerful at age 11/12, a leader of Konoha's Akatsuki unit, whilst keeping him immature enough to make childish comments about Kakashi, Sakura, Jiraiya, etc. seems completely stupid. There I'm done, good luck with the story in any case. Nice choice of pairing as well :D .

Before it was announced in bold for the actual finals pairings, you accidentally wrote Shirosuna instead of Shirotsuchi. I just thought I'd point that out.

I was not expecting that!

This is an excellent story, and I hope you update it soon :)

The story is really interesting. The fact that the autor has portrayed Konoha as a militaristic society in a world full of lies and deceit that cares only about results and not the means is a definite plus. This sketch of Konoha has only been achieved in a few fics like Geor-sama's "Naruto : Altered History" and Adrien Skywalker's "Kurie" and "The Nidaime's Heir". The level of insight that the author has displayed regarding the working of Narutoverse is very detailed and helpful.

The manner in which the author has developed the various characters is very refreshing. He has skillfully showed that the ninja world is not all black and white as seen in traditional fics but that a lot of it is painted in the depressing shades of grey. The sneak peak that the author provides in the minds of spies, politicians and the different pawns that keeps the cogs of the machine known as war in constant motion is really interesting.

The thing that really intrigues me the thought process of characters like Yahiko, Nagato, Naruto, Hiruzen and Sasuke. The way in which they perceive the world is so realistic.

The only negative point regarding this fic is that the author left it unfinished and kept the readers hanging.

i do not really read allot of sandaime bashed so i thought i would try it

I like this story! It is nicely written... Wish that you created the fic with Naruto having the Sharingan and being more like Tobi instead of the orange wearing idot mask though. And his personality being a bit like Madara and Aizen combined... Kyoka Suigetsu! Meaning his calm, collected, insanely intelligent, ruthless and damn strong.

We finally get to know more about Danzo :)

I like the Sarutobi POV in this chapter. I agree with you with the fact that it makes him seem a little less like a jerk. Myself, I'm still really trying to find good in the man, because I liked him at the start of the actual Naruto series for sort of helping to bring the Leaf closer together, but I'm still sort of upset with him for taking such drastic measures with the Uchiha clan. Thankfully his actions in your story don't seem as crazy. (Especially since he let some Uchiha live)