I loved it! :D Great job!

So far I like this story very much. The cases are interesting and I hope to see they all come together in the end of the story. That would be great. As for Peters character I think you write hima bit too bossy. But I could be wrong. I would totally love to have more dialoge in this story. Subscribing for updates.

Amazing and hilarious!

Real, brilliant, too many more adjectives to use here, sheer, utter entertainment.

A must read, and worthy of this impromptu gush-fest.

Eagerly awaiting the promised 'more'.

"'What was that about?'

'What?' Of all the things a genius can do, they can’t successfully play dumb."

I honestly laughed out loud here. And the bit in the second chapter with the brakes receipt? Priceless.

You're characterization of both Peter and Olivia is fantastic.

Please write more 3

Wow, just wow. I personally don't think there was enough focus on Peter in the first season so this is just AMAZING for me. Great work. Any chance of this being carried on? maybe any of your other almost-finished P/O fics? :D

Loved the image of drop bags in Peter's eyes.

Looking forward to reading more of this too. :)

i'm totally loving these zaedah! fabulous characterization and your style just makes me happy inside :D keep 'em coming!

Mwahahaha, you have done it again, my darling. Perfect story, perfect series. I'm so excited to read more.

This line made me laugh out loud: "This was the kind of fortress that young Olivia would have burned her bra to play in."

Great work! :)

Yes, yes, I DO love that vid and have it in my favs list :)

Another cute chapter here.

"blowing up rational men like a gas station on a volcano." Nice.

"Trouble came with that expression." You betcha! I'm waiting for that smile to show up in an "M" fic here. ;)

"When they were handing out nerves, Peter must have swindled three people out opf their portion." :)

Very fun. I hope you have lots more ideas for this one.

"Not that he cooperated with that ideal, with his ‘I care about you’s’ and timely bar offers."

Made me smile like Barbie.

"Who needed authority when you could bluff gold out of trash?"

My favourite line of them all :D Brilliant work. I love reading your stories, they are so descriptive and... (for lack of a better phrase) literally juicy.

I thought that was fun and I love what Peter did.

I could VERY EASILY see this happening on the show.

Peter never ceases to come up with the genius ideas-including how to clear a room of rich, obnoxious, powerful men.

I take it there's more to this story? Bring it on!