Eeeeek! Omg I want more of this please!

This is a fun story. I would love to see where it goes.

Great start. I wonder what the social worker will do because Harry refuses to go to another family and there is most likely no record of James in the muggle world.

Good start. I wonder where this story will go if it ever does.

I like this idea too! It's cool that you chose to do a 7th year HP time travel thing. Although I thought Harry's name didn't have an extension? (not Harold/Harrison, just Harry)

Really really creepy, but really cool idea! I love the way you wrote this :)

Augh! Any of these stories are extremely promising! I loved reading them.

aw I really liked this snippet... it was very cute :)

Have you considered writing more to the story?

I wanna hear how they get together... if they do ;)

I love all your first chapters! You should really work to make them full stories! My favourites were the first and last ones.

I would gladly be your beta reader, but unfortunately I don't meet the requirements to be one on since I don't write fanfiction myself. If you're interested and you want to try, email me!