i hope you give the purple and whites onions .Theres a theory that candypop buds grow in to onions so that could be a reason

You have done a grand thing writing this story. To me, it's unique compared to any other story I've ever read. I hope you continue making fanfiction stories.

Hello! Your book was... inspiring! In fact, I am currently writing the first chapter of my second attempt at a pikmin story. It'll be the third book in my Titan series. Anyway, great read. You really have a way with words, painting a picture in yor reader's head. Hope to speak with you later.

~Lichylichy

Oi! Louie are you an idiot? And Olimar...That poor bloke had just gotten back to his family...

dude you did an amazing job with this story. If this was a game I would buy it. I am talking about your story of course and not pikmin which is a game I already have. Anyway just wanted to tell you that this was a very compelling and addictive story. In conclusion great job.

This might not be quite what you wanted, but its a great story nonetheless. It kept me enthralled to the end. I'm glad Louie had a change of heart, and I liked the chain of Pikmin similar to the move in Super Smash Bros Brawl. Serbol's betrayal of the blue Pikmin really got me mad, especially when seen from Blue's perspective. Serbol was a great villain, especially with his gadgets and weapons. My personal favorite was his use of the Man-at-Legs. If I haven't established it yet, I loved this story! Now I have to read your Metroid story. Keep up the good writing! 8vD

Strong Bad. Nice reference. 8vD

This fic is amazing. I think Nintendo would be impressed with this if they ever read it. the death of BLUE and PURPLE fit the game. Sacrifice has always been a theme in games like Pikmin. You've inspired me to write my own pikmin fanfiction(s). I give this a score of 10/10.

Wow. That was an excellent story, I read the entire thing in two days. Besides the few spelling errors, EVERYTHING else was perfect. I have to say my favorite part was the final battle, and I love how you manage to convey the Pikmins' personalities so well. Just one question though: Why did Louie come to the planet in the first place?

This is pretty damn good. The detail is very nice, and I can almost see every second of this epic. I've only read the first chapter, but I know this will be good.

... I must say, you could become the next J. K. Rowling, or J. R. R. Tolkien. this is a masterpiece that could only be made by God. Are you God, Andor1? Even if your not... If you joined Nintendo and wrote the script for Pikmin 3, I would have no doubt that so many people would buy it, they'd need to make 2-no, 5 million copies a day. You are the BEST FANFICKER ever, and I am honored to share a site with you... Live with much, die with everything. That's what a guy I knew said. Please, don't call me obsessed. I am merely suprised that a human could make a story this good and not be Shigeru Miyamoto (The guy who made Pikmin, Metroid, Mario, Star Fox, F-zero, among other things.) You sir, are an amazing one. Your really special, you know that? If no one official reads this story and wants you to work them, I'll be as suprised as the KKK when Obama became president. I say, the best story in history. Tolkien, Rowling, that dude who wrote the Bible- you surpass them. I can't even think of a number out of (or after) that desribes how good this story is. I just can't. I hope to read more of your stories later, Andor-or, as I should say, God of Literature!

I have only one more chapter to go... please God, let it be good! 10/10...

Pretty good... your worst chapter, but still awesome! I must read the end... and it's 8:46, I should be going to bed! Oh, well. 9/10.

Serbal is a ************... yeah. good story, and imma keep reading! 11/10! Louie, you traitor...

Let's hope 3 Pikmin will be enough, and that the number will rise to 5 (Purple and Bulbmin) soon enough. I hope to finish this soon... and that Pikmin 3 will come out! 10/10.