Please update.

That was soooooooo cute. Ruri'iro kujaku was written really well and I especially love the closing line

Poor yumichika. That is so sad. What mean mean eleventh division peeps. They should be ashamened

This is such an emotional touching story. It's a cleverly put together story and it spins the story in such a way that shows off your talent. Was it just me or did that sound really fancy?

Hi
I'm actually gemma Hitsugaya who no doubt annoyed you with my constant reviewing. I finally have a fanfiction name and now I can "officialy" review. Great story start. Chapter 1 and 2 are touching and awesome. But toshiro is dead and that makes me sad. But keep writing. It's an amazing story

Can u write more please. I crave for yumichika fanfiction. I love toshiro to bits but he has a ton of fanfic. Please write more. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. it story is amazing please

You've given me this clenching feeling in my stomach when u read about yumichika and the pain he was feeling

U killed Toshiro!
*starts crying* I love him.
But thank u 4 writing a yumichika fic. There needs to be more out there.
These dead people? R u making them dead or did Tite Kubo kill them? Not that I mind that Momo is dead

Am I being too hopeful to ask for this to continue? Well, I personally think this is a fantastic story; your writing style has a steady pace, the grammar and spelling are excellent, and I can't see anything wrong with it, really. I realize you might not want to continue this, and that's perfectly fine, your choice and all. I'd just love it if there was a final chapter or so, something to wrap it up a bit.

This is so amazing, really, and I hope this comes off hiatus soon. :D I never heard of the kidou burns, but when I saw the explanation, it seems so resonable that I'm surprised it isn't canon! (Also, after Reading your author's note in chapter 7(?) I looked for that review, and I must say that I had a good laugh from it. It made my day. :D

Thank you for writing this, it was a great read for me!

i love this tory cant wait to see what happends to yumichika

You are doing a wonderful job with this story! Very in character, things progressing believably- I hope you'll keep going! This is too good to abandon!

I never have time to read anything. This was a great chapter, my dear and definitely worth the fairly short wait. Kido burns sound terribly uncomfortable and make sense. Keep up the excellent work.

Love,

PND

What has Yumi done to himself? I very much like the description of his inner soul world while he was in pain and fading. The storm definitely added to the ominous feeling of it all. But yay! Shuuhei was there to help. That just makes it all a little better, well from my point of view hehe.

Oh, a new chapter. I love this story!