| Reviews for Falling Slowly |
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   weird-cute-n-random chapter 3 . 3/16/2011 Sorry, I don't like this...I FLIPPING LOVE IT! Hahaha updaattteeee! I have NO patience! Love it! ~DarbeLei~ |
| Lady of York chapter 3 . 9/20/2009 Hm. Okay, it's good so far. I like how you did the characters. So write more please with (insert favorite ice cream) on top. |
| Jaye Black chapter 3 . 9/20/2009 I love this ahaha. Either Eric is a jerk or he's just really clueless, aha. “Easy for you to say, you can get as many girls as you want. I screw this up and I’m done for,” Jacob said gloomily. I LOVE THAT LINE. It's so silly and hilarious. More soon please! |
| Jaye Black chapter 2 . 9/20/2009 SO I just realized that I never reviewed this! D: I love this eek. I cannot WAIT for Scorpius to show up holy mess. |
| M. S. Arora chapter 2 . 9/6/2009 This is fantastic! The brother-sister and cousinly relationships are coming through so well. I can almost see myself speaking to my siblings that way – the curiosity and nosiness, the slight taunting and yet the unconditional love between them. :) It’s all been weighed out so carefully! This chapter recalled memories from HBP. Ron’s little love potion problem was rather funny. Until he got poisoned, of course... I love the whole girl-talk Rose and Lily had. You’re really building these relationships well! Excellent work. One little misspelling: ‘...mum would’ve been to happy either...’ – ‘too’, yes? Sorry, that’s just me being picky. xD I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Hopefully we’ll learn more about this ‘nice’ Rita Dimitria! MsAurora |
| M. S. Arora chapter 1 . 9/6/2009 Ooh intriguing start! Nice little introduction of Lily, Rose and Albus, there. You managed keep Professor McGonagall in character, putting forth her sense of authority through her speech – I could almost hear the pride in her words when she spoke of Harry. I also found that conversation between Lily and Rose really cute. There was a little confusion between ‘its’ and ‘it’s’ halfway through the chapter (‘...red hair that made it’s way past her shoulders’) though I’m quite sure it’s a typo. Overall, this is a well-written chapter and I’m looking forward to reading the next one! :D MsAurora |
| GrossGirl18 chapter 2 . 9/2/2009 yay 4 sadistic authors who like to torture Albus! :) |
| callmedaynuhh chapter 2 . 8/19/2009 bahahaha! this is good... so far :] |
| ATYHRHKPL chapter 2 . 8/19/2009 Rita! Aewsome, i love the irony. Update! xoxoxo |
| GrossGirl18 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009 as long as u hit the typing buttons! ;) GrossGirl18 reader/reviewer/riter |
| Kailen.Annastasia chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 i love this story please update more soon! :):) |
| LifeAfter chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 This story has started off with an interesting beginning which I tihnk could lead to a very good story. Keep writing, cuz I'll read! |
| CoverGirlInLove chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 This was a good start. I want to know what the surprise is. I would have liked to know a bit more .. not about the surprise, just more things in genral. It's hard to explain. I would have like to have known Lily's age, that would have been good, but otherwise I liked it very much. CGIL xx |
| shutdown231011 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 I like, continue, no comments thus far other than wonderful job. |
| knownhiatus chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Interesting...I like it :D Update soon! |
